King Must Die, The ~ Mary Renault ~ 5/05
jane
April 12, 2005 - 07:17 pm
Welcome to


The King Must Die
by Mary Renault
During our discussion of Edith Hamilton's Mythology earlier this year, the legend of Theseus, King of Athens, reminded several participants of Mary Renault's fictional recreation of this mythical hero in her 1958 novel The King Must Die , and they requested that it be discussed here. The King Must Die is the fascinating story of Theseus, King of Athens, slayer of monsters and abductor of princesses. From the very first pages of this novel he emerges as a clearly defined personality: brave and aggressive, tough, quick and touchingly proud.

The hero's Cretan adventure is the core of the book, which ends with his return to Athens after slaying the Minotaur and escaping from he labyrinth with the help of Ariadne.
"Quite literally a wonderful novel - a novel that is full of wonders." Clifton Fadiman

"A novel unique among modern tales, having both the heroics of mythology and the down-to-earth lustiness of today." Chicago Tribune
Suggested Reading Schedule
May 1-7 - Book One Troizen pp. 1 - 60

May 8-14 - Book Two Eleusis pp. 61-110

May 15-21 - Book Three Athens pp. 111-166

May 22-28 - Book Four Crete pp. 169-308

May 29-31 - Book Five Naxos pp. 311-332


Looking to the discussion of Book Four I'd like to ask the following questions
- Is the name "Cranes" a symbol?
- How did Theseus demonstrate his outstanding ability to lead?
- The unparalled bond he established between himself and every member of his extraordinary team, based solely on absolute trust and collective responsibility, was a crucial factor in their all staying alive in the bull ring time after time.
Would such a phenomenon be possible in today's self-absorbed world, I wonder?
- What traits/attributes does it take for a man and/or a woman to keep performing a life-threatening task from which there is no escape, over and over, in the face of decreasing chances and overwhelming odds?





Discussion Leader: Traude

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Traude S
April 12, 2005 - 08:37 pm
Hello, Friends, and WELCOME!

The discussion of Mary Renault's classic novel The King Must Die is proposed as a follow-up to our discussion of Edith Hamilton's Mythology earlier this year and was planned at the specific request of several participants in that previous discussion.

May 1st is the scheduled opening day but, as you know, we need a qorum to begin. Please indicate or re-affirm your interest in joining me for the new venture. Many thanks in advance.

Scrawler
April 13, 2005 - 01:14 pm
Count me in for this discussion. I'll order the book today.

Mippy
April 13, 2005 - 01:45 pm
Traude,
How lovely to see you setting up to go. Count me in, but late.
I own Bull from the Sea (1962) and Funeral Games, but cannot find The King Must Die... probably loaned it to someone over the years. I love looking for books I've owned for more than 40 years!
We will be shutting down and then traveling May 3-10, visiting family, with few chances to be on-line, but if the phone line is working at our destination (last year it did not!) I'll join on 5/10. We have no cyber-cafes on Cape Cod, yet, so it's the home computer or punt.
Good Luck with your new group!

Scamper
April 13, 2005 - 08:22 pm
I just checked my local library, and they have copies of this book - so count me in! I really enjoyed Edith Hamilton, and I like to read anything that enhances my understanding of mythology. Sometimes it takes me several different readings to remember everything, LOL.

Pamela

Traude S
April 14, 2005 - 07:21 am
GOOD MORNING ! What a great pleasure to see your posts, SCRAWLER, MIPPY and SCAMPER ! I bid you WELCOME.

I have thought about and planned for this project during the protracted winter, which was uncommonly severe even by New England standards, and all through my still ongoing recovery after my accidental fall on the ice in early March.

Your continued interest and your support make me truly happy. Thank you.

Margaret Burke
April 14, 2005 - 07:22 pm
How wonderful. I was delighted to get you post. Of course I'll be here. I love Mary Renault

shifrah
April 15, 2005 - 12:10 am
I would like to participate in the discussion.

Stigler
April 15, 2005 - 06:06 am
Please add my name to the list of those who wish to discuss this book.

Right after we finished the discussion on Mythology, I went into Amazon.com and found the book "The King Must Die". I was able to buy a library copy that was in large print. I can't remember now what I paid; but it was around five dollars. The book is hardback and had not been written in. It is an excellent copy.

I am looking forward to this discussion.

Judy

Traude S
April 15, 2005 - 07:30 am
WELCOME, MARGARET and JUDY, old friends from the "Mythology" discussion, and WELCOME, SHIFRAH, a new friend.

This brings the number of prospective participants to six, and with me we are seven. Thanks to you, we have a quorum ! Wonderful!

Within the next few days I will suggest a reading schedule for our discussion and, in the meantime I welcome any comments you may have on "The King Must Die", or thoughts on Mary Renault, the author.

Adelante!

Thank you.

Judy Shernock
April 15, 2005 - 09:36 pm
HI, I see you already have a Judy so I will sign in formally as Judith for this discussion.

My husband loved the books of Mary Renault and I never got around to reading them. This is the motivation I needed . I will get the book

next week. I read so much my friends call me the "Bookie Monster".

Thanks for giving me the chance to participate in this discussion.

Judith

Mippy
April 16, 2005 - 09:17 am
While waiting for my book to arrive in the mail,
I decided to start reading up on King Theseus.
...hope it's not too early to post a link:


http://www.mythweb.com/heroes/theseus/index.html

Traude S
April 16, 2005 - 07:43 pm
With apologies for coming in late (unexpected visitors in early evening), I'd like to warmly WELCOME JUDITH SHERNOCK to our circle - eight so far!

JUDITH,I am so glad you have joined us.
If by any chance this is your first time in a SN B&L discussion, OR if you have any questions about this one, please don't hesitate to ask. It is essential that every one feel comfortable and at ease. After all, that is one of the reasons why we have a pre-discussion period before the openig "salvo".

Some of us have met previously in other discussions in Books and Literature and are cyber friends. It is a bond -- even though very few actually have laid eyes on each other. What brings us together and unites us is our common love of books and our enjoyment of them.

MIPPY, thank you for the link! No, no, nothing is too early! The pre-discussion period is exactly the time to bring to the table any contributions that will prepare us for the opening salvo.

More tomorrow.

Leah4Swim
April 17, 2005 - 04:19 pm
Traude and others, I have reserved the book from my library and hope to receive it in time to participate in the discussion. Looking forward,

Traude S
April 18, 2005 - 08:08 pm
A special WELCOME for LEAH, a long-time cyber friend.

Please forgive me for not doing so earlier, LEAH. I tried all day to unclog the drain in the kitchen sink - what a distracting, annoying task, necessary though it is!

More tomorrow.

Traude S
April 20, 2005 - 06:50 pm
A thought about the coming discussion.

Since Renault's book is fiction, reading it and discussing it will be quite different from what we did in Hamilton's "Mythology".

"Mythology" is a comprehensive reference work of the old legends that were told throughout centuries of ancient history and literature (with some perhaps inevitable changes); meticulously compiled and retold by Edith Hamilton.

Renault's novel, on the other hand, focuses on only one of the ancient heroes = Theseus. He is the first-person narrator, no one else could tell this pulsating story of adventure, adversity, love and glory better than he - except Mary Renault, of course.

Happy reading.

Traude S
April 21, 2005 - 07:11 pm
My 1988 paperback of "The King Must Die" unfortunately does not have a map of Ancient Greece. In case of your copy of the book doesn't have one either, here is a link. (I hope it works...)
plato-dialogues.org/tools/greece.htm

Traude S
April 21, 2005 - 07:16 pm
The link could not be made clickable.

However, I have been able to conjure it up precisely in the manner shown (without adornments) in the requisite URL spot.

I hope it will work for you too.

Traude S
April 21, 2005 - 07:20 pm
Just tried it again -- and it did work.

Simply enter exactly what I posted, no more, no less.

Please let me hear from you.

kidsal
April 22, 2005 - 01:14 am
I have the book and am interested in reading along with the group.

Traude S
April 22, 2005 - 03:34 am
Good Morning, KIDSAL . It's good to see you! WELCOME!

jane
April 22, 2005 - 10:54 am
Let's see if this will make a clickable:

http://plato-dialogues.org/tools/greece.htm

Several websites no longer use the www but if the http part is included it seems to be a link ok.

jane

Stigler
April 22, 2005 - 12:14 pm
Thank you so much for including that link to the map. I have moved it to my favorites list so that I may refer to it as I read the book.

I have printed it off to put in the front of my book; but it will be good to go to the site and click on the different cities and read more about them.

Judy

Traude S
April 22, 2005 - 06:06 pm
JANE, thank you for coming to my aid and making the link clickable. My grasp of technical matters is rather tenuous, I fear.

To give credit where credit is due, allow me to say here that the visual presentation, the header, the setup, and the initial banner heralding the beginning of a discussion would not be possible without the assistance of our techies - as they are fondly known, among them JANE, MARJORIE, PAT, and the banner makers. Their work is essential and I am grateful for their continued help to me.

JUDY, thank you. Yes, I believe a map is useful in our case so that we can trace the ancient locations mentioned in the book and gauge distances between them. I am on the lookout for more examples.

Traude S
April 22, 2005 - 06:22 pm
The legend of Theseus may be only that, a legend, but the palace existed.


http://www.bluffton.edu/~sullivanm/knossos/knossos.html


I'm so glad the link works.

marni0308
April 23, 2005 - 09:46 pm
Hi, Traude! I'd love to read this book and join in. The book sounds terrific! I just hope I can get my hands on it on time.

I was just watching a program on the History International channel last week about how it is now thought that Jason (of Jason and the Argonauts) might have been a real person and really gone on the quest for the golden fleece. They showed the sea path up to the Black Sea that they think he may have followed and the real places he may have visited.

Marni

Traude S
April 24, 2005 - 05:23 am
Hello, MARNI, Good Morning and WELCOME !

The book is available at BN in paperback for $13.00. , used beginning at $1.99, and in the public libraries, a perennial classic.

Here is the first paragraph of Mary Renault's Author's Note on page 333:
"By classical time the Theseus legend ... had so fabulous a garnish that is has sometimes been dismissed as pure fairy tale or, after Frazer, (*) as religious myth. This briskness was not shared by those who had observed the remarkable durability of Greek tradition; and the rationalists had their first setback when Sir Arthur Evans uncovered the Palace of Knossos, with its labyrinthine complexity, eponymous sacred axes, numerous representations of youths and girls performing the bull-dance, and seal carvings of the bull-headed Minotaur. The most fantastic-seeming part of the tale having thus been linked to fact, it becomes tempting to guess where else a fairy-tale gloss may have disguised human actualities."


(*) = Sir James George Frazer, 1854-1941, Social Anthropologist, born in Glasgow, Scotland.

Mippy
April 24, 2005 - 09:25 am
Friends,
Please watch out when you order books used.
I was ripped off on a used copy of this book, although previously Amazon had been ok.
I guess I did not research carefully when I ordered.
The copy I received, with no return slip enclosed, is so yellowed I can hardly read it.
I'll have to buy a new copy to participate!

Traude S
April 24, 2005 - 10:08 am
MIPPY, I am very sorry to hear of your experience; sorry also because I actually have no personal experience buying used books and merely wanted to mention where the book is or might be available.

I usually try the library first. On occasion I've had the rare pleasure of getting a "virginal" library copy that had just been purchased and "processed". What a thrill!

For a discussion here I prefer my own book, however, to freely make notes in and underline at my heart's content. I order my books from BN and have them delivered by UPS. Only when I couldn't locate my old paperback of Edith Hamilton's "Mythology", did I drive to Borders in the mall.

marni0308
April 25, 2005 - 10:11 pm
I found The King Must Die in the next town's library along with its sequel, The Bull from the Sea. Yay!! I signed them both out. The librarian looked fondly at them, checked when they had been published, and said she still remembers how much she had enjoyed reading them all those years ago.

kidsal
April 26, 2005 - 12:48 am
I bought a yellowed book from Amazon.com. Inside the front cover was a note from one woman to another -- a gift. Enjoyed wondering who these women were -- 1945. Friends perhaps no longer living.

Traude S
April 26, 2005 - 07:46 am
MARNI, KIDSAL, happy reading !

Yes, MARNI, "Bull from the Sea" should (ideally) be read in tandem with the "King Must Die". The two books belong together .

As I said earlier, our book, "The King Must Die" covers HALF of Theseus' life; "Bull from the Sea" tells of his voyage back to Athens, after he had slain the Minotaur (and left Ariadne behind ...)

KIDSAL, isn't it interesting what we can find in old books? We can wonder about a previous reader seeing the notes he/she made in a library copy, what he/she underlined...

Scrawler
April 26, 2005 - 09:34 am
Mippy, write an E-mail to Amazon.com. They will either send you a new copy or will give you credit. Because I use old books for my research, sometime this happens to me too. But Amazon has always been very good to me in that they will may sure you get what you want and if you don't you contact them by E-mail and they try and make it right. Good luck!

Mippy
April 26, 2005 - 12:21 pm
Scrawler, thanks, but I decided to read this old copy, anyway.
Sitting on the patio in the bright sunlight helped, and I don't want to return a book I actually am reading, or to ask for another copy. Please don't worry about me, I wish I hadn't posted as I did, but I wanted to remind others to watch out.

What a great book to reread! I think I first read it in the early 60s.

Traude S
April 29, 2005 - 07:12 pm
A hello to all of you.

I have been and will keep looking for links to some sights of ancient Greece that will tangibly enhance Renault's text, vivid though it already is.

Let me give you two links, one specifically about Poseidon, God of the Sea, whom the Romans called Neptune, the other a list of the Greek gods, just to keep handy
http://www.god-goddess.com/greek-gods-poseidon.html

http://www.greekmythology.com/


To be continued

Traude S
April 29, 2005 - 07:20 pm
The second link in my last post worked fine last night, and a few minutes ago too, but has since developped a problem. As I said, it is only a list of the main Greek gods by their names.

Let me work on it some more. Pazienza! as the Italians say.

Traude S
April 29, 2005 - 08:10 pm
Here is another link, this one to the Greek god Apollo :

http://www.templeapollo.com/index.html

Traude S
April 29, 2005 - 08:34 pm
Just one more about the Oracle of Delphi :
http://www.homepage.mac.com/cparada/GML/Delphi.html


This link is particularly interesting because of the many clickable sources (in blue), the various photos, representations, including maps.

Delphi was considered Omphalos = the navel of the earth.

Traude S
May 1, 2005 - 07:53 am
Good Morning! Again welcome to our discussion ! Thank you for coming in, I've been waiting for you.

The calendar says May first, but it is a raw day on the South Shore of Massachusetts that looks like a throwback to March. Dense fog hangs over the pond across the street, a steady rain is falling, and the heat is on (!). Brrrr

What better way to escape than into the pages of this extraordinary book and Renault's lyrical prose (the book just fell open to pp. 56/57 and the description of the Isthmus)

" ...The sea was calm; as one looked down, it drowned the eye like a second zenith, but bluer stll; bluer than lapis, or sapphire, or whatever flower is bluest; and then again, in the dark clear shadows round the deep roots of the rocks, green and grape-purple, like the ring-dove's sheen. ..."

Read it aloud and capture the sensuous richness of the sound! =======================

Incidentally, If any of you should experience a problem with posting e.g. or anything else of a technical nature, please let me know and I will ask for help from one of our competent techies.

Just that has happened to one of our dear friends from the "Mythology " folder who had counted on being here but suddenly can't register. I am confident that she will receive prompt help.

========================

The suggested reading schedule will appear in my next post.

Scamper
May 1, 2005 - 08:13 am
I just read the first book and am eager to discuss the Theseus story with you all. I remember the legend of the rock - how Theseus must move the rock in order to retrieve his father's sword from beneath it and subsequently find out who his father was. Although it occurred to me immediately when Theseus was struggling to move the rock that he should use a lever to move the stone, I don't remember his doing so as part of the myth.

I'm not usually into historical fiction at all, but reading this is a good way to fix in my memory forever these mythological stories. The book reads very well!

Scrawler
May 1, 2005 - 08:40 am
I too would like to draw attention to pp. 56-57: "Deep blue, and black, the Isthmus is in my memory; blue sky above, with seldom a cloud to break it; and always on the right, black plunging rocks with their feet in a blue sea. The pink dusty road before us, the scrub and the dark pines, lay aways between these depths of blue...It must have been seldom I stood in quiet to gaze at it. My eye was sharpened for other matters. Yet it is the blue that I remember.

I remember that, and the feel of a land without law. On the Isthmus Road, a wounded man by the wayside, his blood black with flies, and his mouth cracking for water, is the sign for wayfarers to flog on their donkeys and get out of sight. There was not much to be done, by the time one found him. I remember one I could only dispatch like a dog gored by the boar. I did it quickly while he was drinking; he got the taste of the water first."

Theseus's memory of Isthmus is one of contrasts. Not only does he remember the natural beauty, but he also remembers the horrors that man has done against the drop back of this seemly beautiful place.

"And always on the right, black plunging rocks..." So Theseus not only had to be cautious of man-made horrors but also of natural situations that could harm him.

What struck me visually about the author's style of writing was the way she contrasted colors: "deep blue, and black of the Isthmus" with the "black plunging rocks" and the"pink dusty road" and "...green and grape-purple, like the ring-dove's sheen."

And what of the contrast of Theseus himself? This paragraph shows him not only to be a cautious man: "It must have been seldom I stood in quiet to gaze at it. My eye was sharpened for other matters." But he was also a compassionate one as well: "...I could only dispatch [the man] like a dog gored by the boar. I did it quickly, while he was driking; he got the taste of the watr first."

Stigler
May 1, 2005 - 10:21 am
I am so glad that the discussion has begun. I have been looking forward to it. The link to the maps has also helped. When I first read the discription of Theseus' travels, I wondered where that was in relation to Athens. It is nice to be able to follow him on the map and to see the Isthmus.

Judy

Scamper
May 1, 2005 - 12:45 pm
I must have missed the links to maps - I love maps! I went back in the postings to look for them but did not find them. Can you tell me the link(s)? Thanks!

annafair
May 1, 2005 - 01:10 pm
Checked with my library today and it is at another library in town but should be in tomorrow or Tues for sure..I hestitated to say I would join because I have been very busy and wanted to make sure I would have the time and my library would have the book. All of the comments makes me want to start so I cam glad I can say I WILL BE HERE TOO>.anna

Traude S
May 1, 2005 - 01:47 pm
Wonderful posts ! Thank you. I feel the overwhelming need to post in a brighter color and hope to have found the right hue.

SCAMPER, the map can be found in # 21 and was made clickable by Jane.

JUDY, I agree. A map is absolutely necessary for the reader's orientation of what is where when reading a historical novel.

I am also working on a glossary, akin to the list of "dramatis personae" in the program of a play, for example, and will include certain terms as they appear and recur, if necessary. Let's begin with isthmus .

My Random House dictionary defines the term as = a narrow strip of land bordered by water on both sides, connecting two larger bodies of land. SCRAPER, our researcher par excellence , may wish to add to that.

The legendary "Isthmian Games" that took place every two years were held in the Isthmus of Corinth.


Here is the suggested Reading Schedule

May 1 - 8 Book One Troizen pp. 1 - 60
May 9 - 14 Book Two Eleusis pp. 61 - 110
May 15 - 21 Book Three Athens pp. 111 - 167


For now I'd like to hold the specific division and "assignment" of Books Four and Five in abeyance, because Book Four, Crete , is disproportionally longer than Book Five, Naxos .
Once we start it will be easier to gauge the pace of the discussion.

Please feel free to read ahead - beyond the number of pages indicated in the schedule - at your own discretion. After all, we already know the broad outlines of "what happened" from Edith Hamilton, Bullfinch and other sources. Our new awareness will come from reading how Renault envisioned it in all the details, clearly well researched.

And yes, "Bull From the Sea", written in 1962, is indeed the sequel. It picks up where "The King Must Die" leaves off, namely on the island of Naxos, where they land briefly and where Ariadne is left behind as Theseus sails on.

More later.

One other quick thought. Those who were in the "Mythology" discussion may remember that we questioned whether the worship of the many Greek gods was - or could be called- a "religion". You may wish to revisit the question.

DeeW
May 1, 2005 - 04:00 pm
I hope this works as I tried to post a message earlier and was told my password wasn't working. Anyhow, I've read ahead, trying to refresh my memory on this book from back in the seventies when I first encountered Mary Renault's books. Since that time, I had the good fortune to visit Greece briefly at least, and it was made all the richer for me, since my readings in mythology and Renault's novels had prepared me.

Traude S
May 1, 2005 - 06:22 pm


GOSSETT, it worked, as I knew it would. Our technical experts have the magic touch - they're the best!

Back later.

Traude S
May 1, 2005 - 08:01 pm
I found a wonderful, detailed, multi-faceted link in the web. It already contains a glossary of names (of people and localities) and maps of the latter, all specifically geared to our book. Ergo there is no need for repetition.

The URL will be produced here tomorrow. Now it's time for a glass of warm milk and a pain pill. Good night.

marni0308
May 1, 2005 - 10:48 pm
Hurray! We're beginning our discussion! I've read only 1/2 of the first chapter, but am ready to join in.

I had pretty much forgotten what I knew about the legend of Theseus. I noticed that a brief synopsis of the story is given at the end of the book. So, I read that first. I'm finding that it was helpful as I move along in the book.

I was thinking about Theseus moving the stone to find the sword. My first thought was that it was so similar to the King Arthur legend where young Arthur pulled the sword from the stone to indicate he was the rightful king. I was wondering if that was originally part of the Theseus legend and what era this legend stems from. Is the sword and the stone type of story found in a number of countries' legends? (You know, like the story of the ark is found in a number of different countries and religions.) Is there some relationship?

Traude referred to a past discussion re something to the effect of: is the belief in many Greek gods a religion? So, I thought I'd throw out another definition:

Polytheism - a word that comes from two Greek words meaning "many gods." People who are polytheistic have a number of gods in their religious belief system and these gods and goddesses each have specific characteristics and perform different functions. A person who is a polytheist might worship one god over and above the others but that person allows for the existence of other gods in their religion.

Marni

Mippy
May 2, 2005 - 06:42 am
Marni, and others, who are looking for background,

In my earlier post, there was a (cartoon-like) link to the Theseus myth:

mythweb

Bullfinch, a more serious link, covers the Theseus myth, plus a great deal more!

Bullfinch Mythology

Scrawler
May 2, 2005 - 08:59 am
According to a commentator for New York Herald Tribune Book Review stated: "Mary Challans [Renault]'s historical novels are excellent. They hold their own as artisically wrought and moving stories and they are rich in the adult entertainment which is the special province of historical fiction. They are paticularly welcome because they illuminate unchartd but essential passages and epochs in the formative stages of our civilization...Her narrative is not, or does it claim to be, history; but it is a well-considered suggestion of how things may have happened, and for the personality and culture with which she deals we have nothing more plausible."

I think that this passage describes the reason why I like Mary Renault's books. I have always liked books about history and she takes history and shakes it like a martini drink and than pours it out for all to see and feel. And I think that we really can relate to Theseus [perhaps with a little envy] as he goes on his quest.

The King Horse: "Soon they forgot me. I climbed the palisade, and went seeking the King Horse...I heard the Horse Master shout behind me; but I closed my ears. "Everyone gives me orders," I thought...I wish I were the King Horse; no one gives them to him." Then I saw him, standing by himself on a little knoll...I went nearer, thinking, as every child thinks once for the first time, "Here is beauty."

He had heard me, and turned to look. I held out my hand, as I did in the stables, and called, "Son of Poseidon!" On this he came trotting up to me, just as the stable horses did. I had brought a lump of salt, and held it out to him."

What does this passage say about Thesus? I think it says that he was not afraid of wild and beautiful things like the King Horse, but he tended to be reckless at times and ignore the warnings of others.

How do you feel about these characteristics? Is it good to be independent and take chances even though we are warned by others not to do so?

jane
May 2, 2005 - 09:27 am
A link Traude asked to be posted here:

Click here for a wonderful glossary of names and places and maps

Traude S
May 2, 2005 - 11:49 am
Thank you for the posts,

thank you, JANE, for posting the new link here.


It has a wealth of information, and it is specifically geared to our book. I warmly recommend your taking a look.

You will note, for example, that the glossary of names given in it follows Mary Renault's sightly different spelling of some of these, notably AIgeus rather than the more commonly used AEgeus (also Aegean Sea, the Aegean Islands, etc.).

Since we are dicussing Books One to Three, the map showing Troizen, Eleusis and Athens is especially pertinent.

Tbe Greek peninsula has been culturally linked with the Aegean Islands and the west coast of Asia Minor since the Neolithic Age. The close proximity of a plethora of islands to the cragged coastline and its many harbors led to a homogeneous maritime civilization.

But cultural homogeneity did NOT bring with it political unity. In fact, what developed were city-kingdoms, often encompassing little more than the area immediately surrounding a town. The most historically famous of these are, of course, Athens and Sparta, Corinth, and Thebes.

Equally important in the context of our story:
archaeological evidence has shown that a primitive Mediterranean people closely akin to the races of northern Africa inhabited the southern Aegean area as far bask as the Neolithic age, before 4000 BC.

We clearly see in our book how the child Theseus distinguishes between the blond, blue-eyed Hellenes and the "dark people" whom they had conquered, driven out, and how theylooked down on anyone having their physical characteristics.

We can guess a great deal about the temperament of the young Theseus from Renault's description :
he is wily, intense, restless, concerned about not growing taller faster, highly resourceful in compensating for the lack of height and weight, keenly competitive, clearly anxious about having a loving mother and imperious, respected grandfather, BUT no clearly identified father.

He is aware of rumors and, being shown great respect, he finds pleasure in fancying himself the son of Poseidon himself, who was believed to have fathered sons with mortal women also in the guise of horses (Zeus is endlessly inventive in that department, of course!). Hence Theseus looks upon the King Horse as his brother.

The chapters in Books One to Three are numbered but I'd like to suggest titles for each of them and will do so later this afternoon when I return from a doctor's appointment. The waiting there is inordinately long but I'll take enough reading material to make me forget the time.

Later!

Scamper
May 2, 2005 - 06:55 pm
Thanks for the links. I particularly liked the map of the places Theseus is going/has been. I've been trying to map it out on another map, and it's great to see that I actually put Eleusius where it belonged!

Scamper
May 2, 2005 - 06:56 pm
It's ironic that the King of the Horses didn't have to be bossed by anyone, but he had to die young. Perhaps that is man's fate, too?

Traude S
May 2, 2005 - 08:45 pm
Boiling mad after yet another "disconnect", I decided to call AOL Technical Support. Miracle of miracles, I spoke with several LIVE people and, finally, with one who knew about Macs.

She led me through a long series of technical steps ... but only time will tell whether the pattern of "disconnects" is finally broken.

I'm truly exhausted after this one-hour exercise and will start my post afresh in the morning.

Scrawler
May 3, 2005 - 08:28 am
For those with maps, if you look at the right side of your map in the Ionian Sea you see a large island called Cephallenia. That is the island where my grandparents came from. My grandfather imigrated to America when he was seventeen in 1910 than sent for my grandmother in 1920. They were bethrothed to each other when they were babies.

I once asked my grandfather why he came to America. He told me that he had three choices. He could either imigrate to Russia, Germany, or the United States. I often wonder what my life would have been like if he had imigrated to Russia or Germany.

Oh, and speaking of blue eyes. My grandmother's brother had blue eyes and blond hair.

Traude S
May 3, 2005 - 10:32 am
SCRAWLER, there we have tangible confirmation of the value of maps ! Hurrah! Thank you for sharing with us the provenance of your ancestors, the Greek island of Cephallonia (in its various spellings).

In B&L we already have a connection, albeit indirect and certainly impersonal, with the island
In 2001 we had one of our "twofers", the discussion of a book, and one of the movie made based on the book.

The book was Corelli's Mandolin by Louis de Bernières, GINNY led the discussion.

The movie was called Captain Corelli's Mandolin . Our beloved LORRIE, who is no longer with us, was the discussion leader.

The discussions were suspended in the wake of the traumatic events of 9/11. There is a record in the Archives.

The point is that the scenes in the movie were filmed on location on the island of Cephallonia!!! And because of our dual discussions I went to the mall to see it, a rare effort for me.

I went with an open mind, without preconceived notions, and un-influenced by the reviews. I am glad I did. I wouldn't have missed it for the world.

Traude S
May 3, 2005 - 03:14 pm
SCAMPER, it seems that the fate of the King Horse was predetermined by the king:

A King Horse was sacrificed to Poseidon every four years ("four-yearly"), "a great day for Troizen", as the child Theseus reports (pg. 3). He knows OF the ritual but does not fully comprehend it. But then how could he ?

This may be a heretical question, but how does the contemporary adult reader feel about the bloodshed?

BTW, Troizen is Renault's own alternative spelling for Troezen , a tow with a tangled mythological history.

Leah4Swim
May 3, 2005 - 04:12 pm
I am enjoying this book and also the discussion here. I have also printed the map and keep it with the book. When I return the book to the library, the map will be my gift to future readers! And I appreciate the list of characters and definitions which has also been printed to help me in keeping track of the characters in the book.

marni0308
May 3, 2005 - 09:05 pm
I'm reading the new Horatio Nelson biography (Nelson, A Dream of Glory) as I am reading The King Must Die. I just found out that Lord Nelson's flagship when he lost his arm in battle in 1797 was the HMS Theseus. I feel like I was fated to read this month's book club selection!

Scrawler
May 4, 2005 - 08:30 am
Just a note about "Corelli's Mandolin." My mother is convinced that the doctor in the story was based on one of her uncles although there is no direct evidence to suggest that. His life paralled the one in the story very closely.

The King Horse: "It was a good clean killing...That blood seemed to tear the soul out of my breast, as if my own heart had shed it."

"The King Horse showed the way; the barons cleared it; and the King led the people. When the work of the King Horse was done, he was given to the god...Horses go blindly to the sacrifice, but the gods give knowledge to men...When the King was dedicated, he knew his moira...And he went consenting, or else he was no king, and power would not fall on him to lead the people...that he chose short life with glory, and to walk with the god, rather than live long, unknown like the stall-fed ox."

Death is a part of life. When I was a little girl, my grandmother used to tell be when I was frustrated with my life: "Life is trouble; only death is not." It is something that the Greeks say often. It is a part of the Greek culture to accept the life that God has given you. It is as true today as it was in ancient times.

Blood is the symbol of the giving of our life. As the story suggests: "...the gods give knowledge to men." As men [and women] we understand the reason that a blood sacrifice is given to the god. From the beginning of time "blood sacrifices" have been given to the god[s] in order to appease them so that they might watch over the people and to insure that the kingdom would have a good year. There isn't a society in ancient times that didn't include "blood sacrifices" as part of their rituals.

Now a days, we see the shedding of blood as being a horrible thing. We have Hollywood to thank for that, but "blood sacrifices" are part of a ritual or custom of a people. There are still some cults that make "blood sacrifices" of animals as part of their rituals. Even the Catholic mass includes a symbolic "blood sacrifice." These rituals or customs should be honored rather than feared.

Traude S
May 4, 2005 - 02:38 pm
Thank you for all the posts. Hello LEAH!

MARNI, how appropriate that you should mention Horatio Nelson, England's greatest naval hero, and the ship named after Theseus! Volume I of Sutgen's biography covers Nelson from 1758 through 1797. In the battle of Trafalgar in October of 1805, Nelson overwhelmingly defeated French and Spanish forces on the ship Victory but was mortally wounded by a French sharpshooter. He died as the battle ended. He was 47.

As a teenager (a lifetime ago) I read a biography of Emma Hamilton, born Emma Lyon of poor parents, who grew up to be a great beauty. She married Sir William Hamilton, the British Ambassador at Naples, and, around 1798, became Nelson's mistress. They had a daughter, Horatia. Emma died in abject poverty in 1815. I still remember how moved I was -- I must have been a romantic, then.

Back to our King.
Now that we have the parameters of time and place, the maps to look at and the sober accounts of the historians, we are free to follow the adventures of Theseus, told in his own voice.

His earliest memories are in chapter 1, which could be called "The Horse Sacrifice". In chapter 2 he experiences for the first time the ominous silence before the approach of "The Earthshaker". We see Theseus maturing rapidly ad sexually awakening at age 12. It is the time of King Minos' tribute, "when the smal boys are taken out from the tall ones, and sent to the hills to hide", and Theseus is not pleased that he is one of them. He is testy and shows his rebelliousness.

Not long after he learns from his mother who is father is, about the sword his father left behind, which Theseus has to retrieve, and from his frandfather the whole story. He understands that his destiny is to find his father, the King of Athens, and return the sword to him.
When does Theseus first show he is fit to be a leader?

What is your impression of Theseus' encounter with the Cretan crew member and the captain of the Cretan ship, where passage had been booked for him, and
why did he decide to take the Isthmus road, notoriously infested with thieves and robbers?

What do we learn about Theseus after Dexios is killed by Skiron, who in turn is killed by Theseus?

Your comments, please.

More questions to come on Book Two.

Scrawler
May 5, 2005 - 08:16 am
I think Theseus knew he would lead his people after the earthquake.

"Henceforth," he said, "you will know it again. If it comes you, run out of doors, and call to the people that Poseidon is angry. Then they can save themselves, before the houses fall. Such warnings are a favor of the god. Try to be worthy.

"Next day in the grove Simo sidled up to me, and thrust something warm into my hands. "For you," he said, and ran away. It was a ring-dove...It trembled between my palms, while I chewed on the thought that Simo had done me sacrifice, as if I were divine."

Up until this time Simo, who was bigger and stronger than Theseus physically, was teasing him. During the earthquake Thesus showed his courage and Simo gave up a ring-dove that he was probably saving to pluck. This action showed that Simo now had respect for Theseus. Once Simo showed his respect to Theseus; he was almost ready to be King.

Did you know that animals are sensitive to earthquakes before an earthquake? Dogs howl and paw the earth, horses paw the earth, cats climb to the highest spot [the refrigerator in my cat's case], and the birds are strangely silent. Even some people can be sensitive to earthquakes.

I've lived all my life in earthquake country and I know when the earthquakes are going to happen. Sometimes it can be a gift and other times it can be a curse, but my warning system did give me time to gather my family under an arch of our house like in 1989 when we had the San Francisco quake.

We all have this warning system, but most of the time we pay little attention. "One day of midsummer...the noon stillness seemed heavier than I had ever known it. The grass of the grove was pale with drought; the mat of pine needles muffled every sound. NO BIRD WAS SINGING; even the cicadas were dumb; the pine-tops stood unmoving against the deep blue sky, as stiff as bronze."

I emphasized "no birds were singing" because this is the biggest signal that a natural disaster is coming, but most of us pay little or no attention. I live close to Mt. St. Helen and just before it erupted I witnessed the animals reacting to the coming disaster. First there was the howling dogs, than my neighbors cats had climbed the tree outside my window to the highest point that the branches were bending, my cat was on top of the refrigerator, but the strangest thing was that I saw large groups of wild animals moving south away from the mountain. My apartment building backs into a national forest so I get to see lots of wild animals, but I've never seen anything like what I saw that day. They were moving very fast and the bigger ones were helping the smaller ones. Predators were running side by side. It was about that time that my TV set started beeping telling me that Mt. St.Helens had erupted.

Stigler
May 5, 2005 - 03:07 pm
Scrawler, what an interesting story about the earthquake and the eruption of Mt. St. Helen's.

I, too, was very impressed with Theseus' ability to sense the coming earthquake. Perhaps the author is using this example to point out the sensitivity of Theseus. And as you pointed out, his natural leadership abilities.

Judy

Traude S
May 5, 2005 - 05:04 pm


Thank you for your posts, SCRAWLER and JUDY. Yes, Theseus was a born leader and it showed early on.

As pointed out in an earlier post, which I acknowledge belatedly, Theseus' pulling out the sword his father had hidden under the rock was a powerful antecedent for the Arthurian legend centuries later.

I read in our book till the wee hours of this morning and spent a long time today sifting anew through the often indiscriminate mass of information on the net. And I also had Edith Hamilton's "Mythology" handy for cross-referencing, especially regarding Eleusis and Persephone .

It is nothing short of wondrous that these legends have survived through centuries upon centuries of cultural, political and societal changes. Renault's presentation is astonishing and masterful. Though a woman, she speaks in a man's voice, and we believe her; we believe Theseus!

Details and nuances are vividly brought to life; all five senses are engaged. Theseus follows the quickening path that has been set before him. The language has an intensity and richness of its very own; there are many quotable even epigrammatic phrases, and I'll mention some soon.

I will start a new post - lest AOL should prematurely disconnect me again ...

Traude S
May 5, 2005 - 05:56 pm
A comparison between the legend of Persephone and Renault's narrative may be in order. Here is the link:
http://www.olympian-foundation.org/persephone_abduction.htm


In Book Two ELEUSIS, Renault appears to have fused the legend with her imaginative powers; but that only enhances the stature of Theseus.

The heroic feats ascribed to Theseus have been quoted many times over in numerous other sources, but I have found no corroboration on the web that Persephone was Queen of Eleusis, or that successive, progressively younger kings, all named Kerkyon, were killed there after one year. In "Mythology", Hamilton makes no mention of King Kerkyon or of Queen Persephone of Eleusis.

However, the narrative of this splendid novel is well served by Renault's having taken this literary license.

Scamper
May 5, 2005 - 06:21 pm
I just finished the book today. I'm not quite sure what to think of the author's work. I agree with others who say she makes it seem real, but there is also an almost childish approach to her reporting of Theseus' thoughts. She also took a great deal of liberty with the legend of Theseus and of Crete. It was clever of her to integrate the pictures of bull leaping into a major element of the story, however. But what happened to the Minotaur who ate the victims?

I suspect my prejudice to historical fiction is showing here. I would have been happier if she had exactly followed the legend as given by someone such as Edith Hamilton. That way I don't get confused as to what the legend was!

Still, it is quite interesting to discuss all of this on seniornet. I'm just not sure I'm a Mary Renault fan!

Scamper
May 5, 2005 - 06:21 pm
Scrawer, that was a fascinating story about the earthquakes and the erruption of Mt. St. Helens. Have you written anything about this? If not, you should. You made the retreat of the animals to the forrest behind your house especially vivid! I could envison a Watership Down type of book in the shadow of the volcano. The natural predators walking side by side, the strong helping the weak, it almost brought tears to my eyes!

Traude S
May 5, 2005 - 06:25 pm
Two more links,

the first one to explain the origin of the recurring terms "Erechtheus" or "Erechthids" (e.g. on pg.118),

the second one to show Theseus killing Phaia.
http://www.csun.edu/~hcfll004/kings-Athens.html http://www.theoi.com/Tartaros/Phaia.html

marni0308
May 5, 2005 - 08:12 pm
Question #1: When does Theseus first show he is fit to be a leader?

I think you see that Theseus has leadership qualities from the time he is age 6 (page 4) when he first meets the King Horse. Theseus connives to get the Master of the Horse to take him along to the chariot colts area. Then Theseus finds the right moment, when nobody was watching, to head over to the horse who “was as wild as the sea.” Theseus thinks the horse is his brother, that they both are sons of the god Poseidon. He says, “It seemed clear to me, therefore, that we ought to meet. I had heard he was only five years. ‘So,’ I thought, ‘though he is the bigger, I am the elder. It is for me to speak first.’”

Theseus shows initiative, bravery, resourcefulness, and that he wise beyond his years at age 6.

Then, one year later (page 12) when Theseus is just 7, when he has observed the sacrifice of the King Horse, he shows a king’s character when he must join his grandfather to be dedicated just after the horse is killed. Theseus thinks he is being led to be sacrificed himself and he is terrorstricken. When Theseus sees the people staring at him, he says to himself, “’Gods’ sons fear nothing. Now they will know, one way or the other.’ And though within me was all dark and crying, yet my foot stepped forward.” At that moment, Theseus hears for the first time the sea-sound of Poseidon in his ears. “I moved with the wave, as if it broke down a wall before me. And I know that having been alone, I was alone no longer.”

You see Theseus, age 7, act with great bravery and dignity, like a king, when he thinks he is being led to his death. And he discovers he has a protector in his special god.

marni0308
May 5, 2005 - 08:47 pm
Question #2: What is your impression of Theseus' encounter with the Cretan crew member and the captain of the Cretan ship, where passage had been booked for him, and why did he decide to take the Isthmus road, notoriously infested with thieves and robbers?

The Cretans from the ship think Theseus’ people, the Troizenians, are barbarians and treat them with no dignity. Theseus has great pride and is angry at the Cretan behavior.

The Cretan shipmaster calls people to board the ship, advertising a safer journey than that over land via the dangerous Isthmus Road. He markets the ship’s passage by saying that the king’s own grandson is booked for the trip. Theseus uses this public opportunity to get back at the Cretans’ bad behavior. He says to the shipmaster, “I’ve changed my mind. Your ship won’t do; I’m used to better.” Theseus gets the Troizenians to cheer.

Theseus is very angry, but he recognizes this in himself. It's important to him to maintain his dignity in front of the people. This is one of many examples where you see that Theseus knows how to use circumstances publicly to win people to his side.

Then Theseus surprises even himself by saying he will travel instead by the Isthmus Road. His anger and pride can lead him into reckless behavior and even danger. But you also see it is in his nature to defy the odds and to be glory seeking. Theseus’ behavior reminds me of John Paul Jones’ famous words, “….. I INTEND TO GO IN HARM’S WAY.”

marni0308
May 5, 2005 - 09:04 pm
Question #3: What do we learn about Theseus after Dexios is killed by Skiron, who in turn is killed by Theseus?

We learn that Theseus will avenge his friends to the death without fear. He becomes a superman in his vengeance. His small size doesn't matter. His anger gives him super "human" abilities to fight. He becomes like the King Horse in battle. Theseus feels no pain from his wounds until the battle is over.

Traude S
May 6, 2005 - 08:07 am
Thank you, MARNI, for your insightful posts.

Indeed, Theseus was born to greatness and it showed early. He led by example, never sparing himself; he inspired absolute loyalty; he spurned the weak and timid into action against the supremacy of robbers and thieves.

In Eleusis, where he was of no importance other than as a bed partner to the Queen, his ever-vigilant young guardsmen called him "Boy" at first, but he made men out of them, men who were ready to give their lives for him.

For his part, Theseus voices contempt for the Shore People and the Cretans early. He considers them barbaric. He describes some as swarthy; singles out a negro slave.

It may be useful to describe the origin of the blood sacrifice of boys and girls for the Minotaur.

Minos was the powerful King of Crete. Poseidon had given him a beautiful bull so that Minos should sacrifice it for him. But Minos could not bear to slay it and kept the beautiful bull for himself instead.

To punish him, Poseidon made Pasiphaë, Minos' wife, fall madly in love with the bull. Their offspring was a monster, half bull, half human, called the Minotaur. Minos did not have him killed after birth but a place of confinement was built for him by the architect and inventor Daedalus = the Labyrinth, famous throughout the ancient world.

Years before Theseus arrived in Athens, a terrible misfortune happened there. While Androgeous, King Minos' only son, was visiting the King of Athens, the latter, King Aigeus, sent his guest on an expedition of great peril -- to kill a dangerous bull. But the bull killed Androgeus.

Minos swiftly invaded the country, captured Athens amd threatened to raze the city, unless every nine years the people would send him a tribute of seven maidens and seven youths. Once in Crete, they were given to the Minotaur to devour.

When we discussed "Mythology", we dwelled on the hated figure of Medea, and specifically on the role she had played earlier in her life in the Argonauts' search for the Golden Fleece. She became Jason's companion and had two sons with him. Yet, despite everything she had done for him, he pushed her aside and turned his attention to another woman.

Medea, a sorceress, made a dress for the new bride, and when the bride put it on, the dress burst into flames, suffocating her. To further punish Jason, Medea killed their two sons and then escaped heavenward on a chariot drawn by dragons.

Medea's murder of her own children gave us pause and we wondered about present-day Medeas.

Forgive me if I am redundant; I merely wanted to refer to the historical antecedents in case they were needed.

More later.

Scrawler
May 6, 2005 - 08:33 am
Thank you for your kind words. No I haven't written anything about the animals I see, but that's a great idea. I just enjoy watching them from my balcony as they wander down to the wetlands in my complex. My neighbors laugh at me because I have signs: "Fur to the left and feathers to the right." I realize animals can't read, but when they come and eat what I put out, I can't help wonder if they sense the difference and go where the signs tell them. I haven't seen as many animals since, so I have to assume the disater is over. We can all learn so much from watching our animals.

"See, now, Thesus, no one can do everything. Some things need a light man, others a heavy one. Why can't you take yourself as you are? You are doing well enough...If you are sensible and get to know yourself, you'll seldom come away from the games without two or three prizes. That should be enough for anyone. It's time you stopped fretting your heart out, and wasting time, over contests where only weight will do. You will never make a westler, Theseus. Face it once and for all."

This is very interesting passage. Diokles is trying to get Theseus to accept himself for who he is. And considering what happens later the story, the comment about Theseus NOT being a westler is very provocative. The ancient Greeks believed in accepting their lots in life. But Theseus doesn't accept his lot in life,

Early in the story we see him not accepting the ocean voyage and taking the harder way. He makes his own choice, even against the better judgments of his mother and his grandfather. He shows his independence, but now he must live with his choice. If Theseus had gone by sea, would Dexios have died?

Sometimes its hard to accept our phyiscal bodies for what they are, but it is even harder to accept ourselves for the choices we have made. But our choices are part of who we are; just like the choices Theseus has made and will make will be a part of who he is. Do you think in some way that Mary Renault was telling us that her choices in life style were her own and that they were who she was?

marni0308
May 6, 2005 - 10:22 am
It's interesting to see Theseus presented as a small man in this book. The author explains at the end (in my copy) that it makes sense for him to be small in order to perform the gymnastics of a bull dancer.

I can't help but think of the term "Napoleon complex." Theseus certainly was not alone in feeling humiliation from being small and physically weaker than other males his age who were larger and stronger. I guess it's traditionally the manly thing to need to be large and strong - I suppose from men's role throughout history as hunter/warrior/protector.

It's interesting to read how many famous war heroes were considered small - Napoleon, Horatio Nelson, Alexander Hamilton, John Paul Jones, for example. Each of these small men were vainglorious and valiently went out of their way often to face death. Perhaps they felt they had to prove that they were as manly as larger stronger men.

DeeW
May 6, 2005 - 10:36 am
How refreshing to find a hero who doesn't have x-ray vision, superhuman strength etc. yet manages to cope with danger and inspire others to do the same. I love the way the conception of Theseus is explained so that it seems plausible, to me at least. Considering that his young mother had been brought up on the myths, it would be quite logical that she would assume her lover is Posiden himself, complete with seaweed decor! I love these stories and am anxiously looking forward to sharing them with my mythology-loving grandson when he is old enough. The myths as told by Hamilton are exciting and interesting, but the way Mary Renault fleshes them out is "icing on the cake"!

Traude S
May 6, 2005 - 08:17 pm
GOSSETT, yes indeed.

Mary Renault has fleshed out the story of Theseus lovingly, credibly, persuasively, and in beautiful language with striking metaphors
e.g. "...the place overwhelmed my soul, as an ant drowns in a river..."
"... the sea seemed sown with a thousand points of fire, every flame with its rippling image."
"The moon was like a handful of wool.";
"...the line of faces (of the boys and girls in the square) was like one long pale serpent filled with eyes";
aphoristic (wise) sayings
e.g. "A boy is youngest when he thinks himself a man.";
"When I rode on to meet the army (on his return to Eleusis), I learned a thing one never forgets after: how much easier it is to move the many than the few.";
= all extraordinary observations and reflections, clearly based on a deep understanding of human nature.



Regarding moira: the Greeks saw their moira personified by THE FATES, Moirae in Greek, Parcae in Latin, who, the Greek historian Hesiod says, "give to men at birth evil and good to have. There were three, Clotho, the Spinner, who spun the thread of life; Lachesis, the Disposer of Lots, who assigned to each man his destiny; Atropos, she who could not be turned, who carried 'the abhorrèd shears' and cut the thread at death."
(from Edith Hamilton's Mythology , pg. 49).

What a brilliant evocation, what vivid images of scenery, the exterior and interior design of the palaces in Eleusis and in Athens, the battle gear of the men, their weapons, the combat scenes, and the victorious return with "the wagons of the spoil, the women and the herded cattle." ! (pg. 113).

Traude S
May 6, 2005 - 09:32 pm
SCRAWLER,

I'd like to answer your question in # 74 with another question:

if we were to accept ourselves as we are and be content, wouldn't we voluntarily stay within boundaries of our own making?

Why not aim higher, go farther, reach for the impossible dream?

More comments on SCRAWLER's question, anyone?

Good night.

DeeW
May 7, 2005 - 04:55 am
I think the trick is to know how much we must accept. Rememember the words of St. Francis, "Lord help me to accept the things I cannot change, courage to change what I must and THE WISDOM TO KNOW THE DIFFERENCE !" Theseus had to accept the limitation of his height, as there was nothing else at that time to do about it...before growth hormone therapy...but he didn't accept any limitation other than that.

Scrawler
May 7, 2005 - 10:23 am
I think we have within each of us the ability to have the impossible dream up to a point. I know myself that if I aim to high I get frustrated as is true if I aim to low. It is the balance and harmony that I accept not only within me, but also the natural world all around me.

I always wanted to be a writer since I started writing stories on the wall of my bedroom [much to the frustration of my parents]. And now after more than fifty years, I have accomplished my goal. But I write for my own pleasure, if I get something for it so be it, but I'm not out to make a fortune. My reward is when someone tells they've read my book and say they really enjoyed it.

I guess what I was really saying is that I've known people who have strived higher than what their natural abilities can produce. We can always learn more. I never went to college, but I taught myself history by reading every book I could get a hold of and turned that knowledge into a collection of short stories and poems which have been on the market since last year. Forgive me if I toot my own horn here, I'm just trying to illustrate what one can accomplish by staying within one's abilities.

Theseus gives us a good example of using his knowledge and staying within his own abilities: "...There had been nothing at all about raising the stone with my bare hands; only that I must do it alone.

I worked the lever well under, and stretched my back; the end of the stone rose up, and I kicked fulcrum under. Then, when I was going to bear down, I remembered there was something to get out from below; when I let go of the lever, the stone would fall again. I sat down to think, on the root of the oak tree; and seeing it stand above the ground, I saw my way. It was lucky I had brought a longer lever. It would just reach to wedge under the oak root.

Bearing down so far would have been easy for a heavy man, but was a hard fight for me. But this time I meant to do it if it killed me, because I knew it could be done. Twice I got it nearly there, and twice the weight bore it up again; but when I flung myself on it the third time, I heard in my ears the sea-sound of Poseidon. Then I knew this time I would do it; and so I did."

Theseus realized that he couldn't raise the stone with his bare hands. But he was smart enough to realize that he needed more than his physical strength to raise the stone. We see that even after two unsuccessful try Theseus doesn't give up. This says alot about the character of Theseus and is another reason that he will someday make a good king. And of course, it doesn't hurt to:"...[hear] in my ears the sea-sound of Poseidon."

marni0308
May 7, 2005 - 12:49 pm
I don't think Theseus accepted the limits of his smaller size. He always found a way around any limits. Since his small size limited his ability in wrestling, he changed the rules. He invested a new style of wrestling so he could excel. Theseus always managed to figure out a way around any obstacle, whether through his own amazing physical abilities, or his resourcesfulness, or by using other people.

And then there was Theseus' use of his gods. There are a number of instances when Theseus cannot accomplish a difficult task by himself and he calls upon his gods, particular Poseidon. Apparently, with the god's help, Theseus is able to succeed.

This is a bit of a puzzle for me. I'm not sure of his relationship with Poseidon. Theseus always seems to think that he is the son of Poseidon, even when he learns the story of his human father. When Theseus calls upon Poseidon to help him at various times, he hears the sea in his ears (or other evidence of his god's presence) and he accomplishes fairly super human tasks. Sometimes, it seems to me, Theseus actually becomes Poseidon, in one form or another. For instance, when Theseus seems to become the King Horse to avenge Dexios. (The horse is one of the forms of Poseidon.)

At times it seems the author is making a human story of the myth of Theseus. Yet, Renault's story is still like a myth in the godlike qualities of Theseus. Is he Poseidon's son or not? Does he have super powers or not? Does he actually become Poseidon at times?

Traude S
May 7, 2005 - 09:39 pm
Ah yes, MARNI, there it is in a nutshell. You said it!

"Renault made a human story of a legend." That was clearly her intent. ( The Bull from the Sea is in fact the sequel and recounts what happened to Theseus after he rid the world of the Minotaur.)

A legend, a myth, is unverifiable, handed down by tradition from earlier times and by popularity, accepted over time as 'historical'.
The body of legends is known as mythology.

People began to wonder about their creation, birth and death, the elementary forces of nature, sun, moon, the stars, storms, floods. The necessity of water, the power of fire.

Some men- usually men rather than women- overcame disaster more quickly, more cleverly than others. There were followers and leaders early on in the continuous battle for survival, and for land to grow crops for food.

The Greeks created and believed in a large number of deities to whom they prayed for their every physical need. DEMETER was the Goddess of the Corn, for example. You recall that, while she searched the earth for her daughter Persephone, she neglected her duties, and the land fell barren ----(an early "explantion" for the change of seasons?).

It is Renault's singular achievement to have brought to life for the contemporary reader in the form of a novel events which MAY have taken place but which cannot be proven to have happened, or in quite that way.

With expansion came territorial conflicts, the desire, then the need to conquer, or be subjugated in turn. There were early heroes, some superheroes, whose deeds were superhuman, all transmitted in oral tradition, before writing and expression in art.

Twelve hundred years separate the first writers through whom the myths have come down to us from the last . Greek and Roman mythology is quite generally supposed to show us the way the human race thought and felt untold ages ago. The real interest in the myths is that they lead us back to a time when the world was young and people had a connection with the earth, with trees and seas and flowers and hills ...

The Greeks felt they knew just what the divine inhabitants of Olympus did there, what they ate and drank and where they had their banquets. They were to be feared because they were powerful and could be dangerous when angry. Temples were built to them and sacrifices offered by priestesses. The Greeks created their gods in their own image, i.e. fully human in every respect.

Renault has built on the myth of Theseus and enlivened it, and I believe she intended her books to be read as a re-enactment, a fantastic adventure.

In that spirit let us continue reading and accompany Theseus and the youths on their voyage to Crete and see what awaits them there, how they are received, where they are housed, whom and what they find there. Let us be silent observers and virtual participants.

Thank you, SCRAWLER, for sharing your personal experiences with us. Your contributions are always pertinent as well as interesting. It is very late again and I will have to continue this post in the morning.

Traude S
May 8, 2005 - 07:40 am


Here's wishing the mothers in our midst a VERY HAPPY MOTHERS' DAY.


Yesterday I spent a happy afternoon with my son's family and will rejoin them today for a late lunch. But I will be on line before that and when I return.

There is much more to say about Theseus, especially about his volunteering to be in the party of youngsters chosen for the sacrifice on Crete. He, the King's son!

Don't you agree that was an extraordinary measure of courage?
Didn't that gesture alone make him a hero in the eyes of the Athenian people?


I would like to reiterate that, before we even completed the discussion of Hamilton's "Mythology", this book was suggested as a follow-up by six or seven of you and chosen by popular demand. Several of you had read it before, as had I.

It was Theseus among the many Greek heroes whose lives and deeds we retraced with Hamilton in "Mythology" you wanted to read about again, and specifically in Renault's retelling of the story.

What are your thoughts now ?
Are your feelings as strong as they were the first time ?
Do you still admire him despite his shortcomings?

In our pre-discussion and until now I have deliberately chosen not to dwell on the author. Though she lived an intensely private life, some details have become known. We can talk about it at any time, of course. But it was my plan to first discuss the book, the story, and Renault's retelling of it.

As the participants in the Mythology discussion will recall, we were give permission to extend the customary 4-week discussion period until we had covered the material in Hamilton's massive wwork.

For "The King Must Die" discussion we have one month.

Traude S
May 9, 2005 - 07:52 am
Our focus this week is Book Two, ELEUSIS, pp. 61-110. Some of you may have read ahead, as have I.

On May 15 the focus wll be on Book Three, ATHENS, pp. 111-166.
Book Four, CRETE, is the longest wth 163 pages, and Book Five, NAXOS, with 21 pp. the shortest.

Book Four on CRETE is of very special import to the story and ought to be read as a whole, and preferably not "split up". Though mindful of time contraints, I feel that neither our reading nor our discussion ought to be hurried.

Please let me know whether you are comfortable with the pace I have set. Thank you.

Stigler
May 9, 2005 - 10:14 am
Traude, I think the pace that you have set is excellent. I am able to read and keep up with the story.

Thank you.

Judy

Scrawler
May 10, 2005 - 08:04 am
"Truly your journey has been blessed, and here it ends...There is only one journey that all men make. They go forth from the Mother, and do what men are born to do, till she stretches forth her hand, and calls them home.

"But some are called to a higher destiny. As you are, stranger, who come here fulfilling the omens, on the day when the King must die."

What can the reader reflect from this passage? The first thought I had was: "wrong place, wrong time" but I think Renault wants us to reflect much deeper. We can see that throughout this book she illustrated her distaste for the negative aspects of the mother-goddess archtype.

But what were the negative aspects of religion? Certainly, Theseus living in the ancient world was no stranger to human or animal sacrifice to the gods. After all he had watched the King Horse be scacrificed. So what was it that to use a modern phrase "turned off" Theseus from this particular religion?

If we step back (on page 17) we see that: "Later the custom altered. Perhaps they had a King they could not spare, when war or plague had thinned the Kindred. Or perhaps Apollo showed them a hidden thing. But they ceased to offer the King at a set time. They kept him for the extreme sacrifice, to appease the gods in their great angers, when they had sent no rain, or the cattle died, or in a hard war. And it was no one's place to say to him, 'It is time to make the offering.' He was the nearest to the god, because he consented to his moira; and he himself received the god's commandment."

And so we see that Theseus accepted human sacrafice, but only when by a king's death in the light of a great disaster. But the most important thing was that the king, himself, had to make the choice. "And it was no one's place to say to him, 'It is time to make the offering..." After all, if he was a good king, wouldn't he be willing to lay down his life for his people!

DeeW
May 10, 2005 - 10:14 am
Traude, I agree that the pace you've set for us is fine. It leaves us time to read leisurely and reflect on what we've read. I am enjoying this book much more the second time around, but I suspect it's I who have changed and attained a much broader experience than I had thirty years ago. Scrawler, I enjoyed your latest post. It gives us much to think about.

Traude S
May 10, 2005 - 04:52 pm
Thank for your thoughts, SCRAWLER and GOSSETT.

The worship of the gods Poseidon and Apollo was very much a part of Theseus' life; his mother was a priestess.

However, what he found when at last he arrived in Eleusis, glad "to see a town again" and to be in a "land of law", (or so he thought) (pg. 63), was not anticipated. He had expected that "his horses would be fed and groomed" while he "ate and saw the sights."

But then, as he "came to the edge of the town", he saw "the road all lined with staring people and the rooftops thick with them".

" Young men like to think themselves somebody; "(!) but even to him "this seemed surprising", and strange to think that out of so many who had come to see him, "no one called out or asked for news."

It is worth re-reading the scene of Theseus' arrival in the market place, full of people, all silent, mothers hushing the babes they carried.

In the midst he saw a stately woman, her hair as red as firelit copper, wearing a diadem of purple stitched with gold, a servant holding a parasol over her head, and a score of women around her.

He thought she must be both priestess and reigning queen, and this a Minyan kingdom: "That is what the Shore People call themselves in their own places."

Unfamiliar with the Minyan custom of the King Sacrifice, Theseus did not realize in these first minutes that the queen and the people had been waiting for him, Theseus, that news of his killing the robber Skiron had spread like wildfire and preceded his arrival, that the young king was fated to die on that very day, that he, Theseus, had been chosen to fight him and would kill him. The prize was the queen.

Yes, GOSSETT, I think we perceive different things whe we read a book a second or a third time because we ourselves have inevitably changed.

Traude S
May 10, 2005 - 05:21 pm
There are only two or three oblique references in the web to the Minyan Kingdom of Greek antiquity and of King Minyas.

Hamilton does not mention either. Perhaps those of you who have access to Bullfinch or another source could check the respective index. Thank you.

marni0308
May 10, 2005 - 08:54 pm
Scrawler: I think you pointed out something very important when you said, "And so we see that Theseus accepted human sacrafice, but only when by a king's death in the light of a great disaster. But the most important thing was that the king, himself, had to make the choice.

The title of the book is The King Must Die. Obviously, that's pretty key in the novel.

We saw in Troizen when Theseus was a boy that the King Horse had to die annually as a sacrifice. We saw during the ritual that the horse "consented" to his death. Theseus was told later: "When the work of the King Horse was done, he was given to the god....And in those days, said my great-grandfather, as with the King Horse, so with the King."

Then we saw in Eleusis that annually the king (Kerkyon) must die as a sacrifice in mano a mano battle, unless he beat his opponent who would die instead. Theseus saw here that Kerkyon did NOT consent to his death. (The people of Eleusis follow more ancient religious rituals than the people of Troizen. Theseus changes things, of course.)

Even if we didn't know anything about the Theseus legend, we would at this point anticipate future sacrificial deaths of kings in the book. We wonder: When, why, and how will the deaths happen? Will they be sacrificial deaths? Will the king(s) consent? When will it be Theseus' turn?

Judy Shernock
May 10, 2005 - 09:37 pm
Theseus is very concerned with his image. He claims to be Nineteen when he is much younger.He has killed a King and bedded a Queen. His head is swelling. Is this the rise before the fall?

Theseus has lived a charmed life-comparable to a Rock Star of today. But huge fame in War (or in Entertainment) brings its problems. In the end you "Pay the Piper" in one way or another-if you are human.

Mary Renault is a talented writer and keeps our interest by constant drama. But the book is long and much will happen to this Man-Boy.

I wonder though,is the King who must die, Theseus all along?

"Is the end in the beginning?" (to quote T.S.Eliot).

Judith

Scrawler
May 11, 2005 - 08:26 am
Stoicism is a Greek school of philosophy founded by Zeno about 308 B.C. holding that all things, properies, relations, etc are governed by unvarying natural laws and that the wise man should follow virtue alone; obtained through reason, remaining indifferent to the external world and to passion or emotion.

On the fly leaf is a quote from Achilles, in the Illad: "Oh, Mother! I was born to die soon; but Olympian Zeus the Thunder owes me some honor for it."

As Judith stated in her post: "Is the end in the beginning." ~ T.S. Elliot

We can see all of these things in Theseus. Just like Achilles he realizes he, too, must die, but he wants to die with honor. "No the odds will not be even. He is fighting for his kingdom, which I do not want, and his life, which I don't want either. I cannot hate him, as a warrior should his enemy; not even be angry except with his people, who are turning from him like rats from an empty barn. If I were an Earthling, I should feel their wishes fighting for me. But I cannot dance to their piping; I am a Hellene."

"...He is the scapegoat. Looking at him, they see only the year's troubles, the crop that failed, the barren cows, the sickness. They want to kill their troubles with him and start again." Mary Renault shows through her imaginative stories how society could be different. Do we to think that our troubles in our own world will cease if we kill our kings? So just as Theseus changed his ancient world; so can we. According to the phliosophical idea of Stoicism a wise man should follow virture alone; obtained through reason, remaining indifferent to the external world and to passion or emotion. In part doesn't this Stoicism also apply to today's world?

And finally, Judith quoted T.S. Elliot: "Is the end in the beginning." I think the seeds of what our life could be like will be planted at the beginning of our life; but what we do with these seeds is up to us. I think Theseus has demonstrated this idea throughout the book. He has chosen honor and virture - seeds that were planted in him at the beginning of his life.

marni0308
May 11, 2005 - 09:55 am
Scrawler: When you quoted the book, you got me thinking: "...He is the scapegoat. Looking at him, they see only the year's troubles, the crop that failed, the barren cows, the sickness. They want to kill their troubles with him and start again."

Theseus was able to change this ancient Eleusis annual sacrificial ritual by replacing the Kerkyon with a non-human annual scapegoat sacrifice. So, their religion evolved.

I'm thinking that in a sense Christians today have something similar to the Eleusians in their religion. Christians have a "scapegoat" in a sense who helps them to "kill their troubles and start again." Jesus, as God's son, died for people's sins.

I am a non-practicing Protestant and don't know a lot about the world's religions, including my own, unfortunately. But, I'm wondering if today's major religions aren't all simply evolutions of what we may call "pagan" ancient religions. Do they all have some sort of evolved "scapegoat"? Are we all still really the same as the ancient Eleusians looking for something to save us and make our world better?

Judy Shernock
May 11, 2005 - 08:52 pm
Hinduism and Buddhism existed before the three great Monotheistic

religions.(Judaism, Christianity and Islam)..

Sigmund Freud commented "Religous intolerance was inevitably born with

the belief in one God". (In his book Moses and Monotheism).

However Mary Renault shows us that the various Polytheistic Greek States had the same sort of infighting and certainity that their gods were superior that modern day religions have in their own belief systems. It is refreshing to know that this is an ageless problems and perhaps Freud was wrong.

So much to think about,so little time.

Judith

marni0308
May 11, 2005 - 09:34 pm
I just finished The Bull From the Sea, the sequel to The King Must Die. It got me thinking a bit more about the line by T.S. Elliot quoted by Judy and Scrawler.

Foreseeing the future plays an important role in the books and in Greek legends and mythology. I don't think too many of us have that advantage (or disadvantage) today! So many of the female characters are priestesses of one kind or another and have the gift. The gods speak to them. A number of these women know the "end" in the "beginning." Like Achilles' mother. And Theseus' mother. Medea. Etc. Etc. Even some of the men and priests can foresee the future, although they aren't privy to the "Mysteries." And destiny is shaped by the gods.

To tell or not to tell? That's always a big question for those who see the future in the book. Sometimes they tell and sometimes they don't. And what does one do when one knows his/her future, whether it be death or something else? Does one just go stoically along and accept things? What will be will be? Does one just "consent"? Or does one change things?

In Theseus we see both. Sometimes he accepts what is to be. But, he defies the gods sometimes, deliberately at times and unintentionally at times. And you just know he's going to get payback. There's always payback from the gods if you mess with them.

marni0308
May 11, 2005 - 10:04 pm
I think I would have felt like pulling my hair out if I had been Theseus, what with all the different gods to contend with, each with his/her own agendas, often conflicting with some other god's. Every time Theseus took some action based on one god's wishes, he was defying another god. What to do? What to do? He was damned if he did and damned if he didn't!

I guess the priests and priestesses had it all figured out with the rites of sacrifice and cleansing. There was certainly a lot of that what with the constant appeasement of the gods, the prayers and requests, and the thanks etc. And every god had its own particular rituals. Rituals 101. The priests and priestesses had pretty secure jobs, I guess! But then, they too had to juggle the gods' needs with the kings' needs. Reminds me of that title "The Razor's Edge"!

I guess the development of monotheism helped to simplify things.

Mippy
May 12, 2005 - 06:53 am
Hi, all you diligent readers, it's good to be back.
We were having connection problems for a whole week.

One God, to many scholars, is an integral part of the development of human society, as explained in the outstanding book Guns, Germs, and Steel by J. Diamond.

The multiple gods of the Greeks, however, were not strictly polytheism, because Zeus was the most powerful, as well exemplified in the Iliad. Although Athena and Hera fought over the Trojan war heros, they never were able to go against the wishes of Zeus.

As human society developed from clans (extended families) to kingdoms or entities led by princes, religions appeared in many forms. In some cases it was an established state religion, as in Egypt; in the case of Jews in the region of modern Israel, it was a state where the judges were the high rabbis (High Priests), and the king would never go against their wishes; these were the times of King David or King Solomon, not modern Palestine, or Israel.

Thus Theseus is answering the demands of the gods just as a modern soldier prays with an army chaplain before turning toward the front lines and advancing into battle.

Marne: May I disagree with your comment above?
I don't think the women were foreseeing the future in some of your examples. I think the author was endowing the characters with that ability to further the story-line. The Iliad is very-long, outstanding fiction, not unlike the long novels of Dickens. It is not history.
So when Achilles mother forecasts his death, so that he himself speaks of his certain death in battle, it is a wonderful plot devise, it is not a fact of history.

On another subject, has everyone noted how often in the myths the outstanding children are the sons of gods: Perseus, son of Danae, for example; also, Theseus in the legend, not in this novel. Modern women who will not name the father of their children can't get away with this, can they? Do some wish that they could?

Scrawler
May 12, 2005 - 08:15 am
In the myth Theseus, Hamilton shows: "These myths explicate their moral lessons by showing that correct behavior is rewarded but rule-breaking - such as hubris towards the gods - is punished."

According to Webster, "hubris" is defined as wanton insolenance or arrogance resulting from excessive pride or from passion.

By studying myths, we can learn how different societies have answered basic questions about the world and the individual's place in it. By examining myths, we can better understand the feelings and values that bind members of society into one group. We can compare the myths of various cultures to discover how these cultures differ and how they resemble one another. We can also study myths to try to understand why people behave they do.

"For a while I was quiet floating on the sea. Then I said, "Blue Haired Poseidon, Earth-Shaker, Horse Father! You are the lord of the Goddess. If I served your altar well in Troizen, if you were there at my begetting, lead me on toward my moira; be my friend in this land of women."

"The scent of her hair came close, and I felt her hand on my neck. "What has the Mother done to me," she whispered, "sending me a wild horse-tamer of the Sky Folk, a blue-eye charioteer without law or custom or respect for anything? Don't you understand even seedtime and reaping? How can the people trust the harvest, unless they see it sown? We have done what is needful now; they will ask no more of us. Now comes the time when we can please ourselves."

Mary Renault never claimed that her historical novels were anything but fiction. But they do illustrate through images that which we ourselves understand what could have happened in ancient times. We see for ourselves the "blue-eyed charioteer" being embraced by a woman who moments before he had called a "...barefaced bitch! You deserve to die..."

What than does this tell us about Theseus? Perhaps, only that when it comes down to it we are really just all human beings and that sometimes we forget even our promises to the gods in the fit of passion!

DeeW
May 12, 2005 - 08:16 am
It's strange that we're reading how Theseus re-established the male domination in the religion of his people, while here in our times, there is strong and growing interest in the lost feminine influence. For example, many young people I know have turned to the ancient Pagan rituals and beliefs in gods and goddesses. I even have a mature neighbor who was brought up on this religion and I've only recently learned this. Also, there is the uncanny popularity of the novel The Da Vinci Code, which claims that in early Christianity, women were much more powerful than we have been led to believe. Even though the book is fiction, many are taking it for fact. Personally, I find the thesis interesting and though I don't accept it totally as truth, I truly believe that womens' influence was deliberatly played down by the men in the early Christian religion. I don't foresee any resurgence of women's power in the Catholic faith, not under this new Pope.

marni0308
May 12, 2005 - 08:20 am
Hi, Mippy. I didn't mean to imply that I believed The King Must Die is history. I had commented earlier that I think the author is making a human story out of a legend. But, even so, The King Must Die still sounds like a legend because of things like the interactions between gods and people.

I don't know that much about the period and haven't read the Iliad. But, I do think some of the events in the legend probably really happened and many of the places were real. I think Renault shows this. I commented earlier about a History channel program that showed some scientists following the trail of Jason and the Argonauts to show that the places they visited could have been real and that there could have been a real golden fleece. (The Bull From the Sea does this also.) And, just like in the game "telephone," stories change when passed along over time.

I imagine the people of ancient times believed as much in their multiple gods as people today believe in our god(s), whatever our religion, maybe more so because they didn't have the scientific knowledge and technology available today that has destroyed so many beliefs.

Now that I think about it, though, we still can have waves of religious resurgence today as happened in the several "Great Awakenings" in America and which may be happening again now. I suppose times of trial bring out fear and many feel a need to grasp on to religion to help them get through it. Which gets me back to the Eleusians and how maybe we're not so different today after all.

marni0308
May 12, 2005 - 08:41 am
It IS interesting how popular the Da Vinci Code is and how people seem to think it is history. However, some of it does seem plausible. It does seem that a number of ancient religions and cultures were matriarchal, based on what archeologists and anthropologists have discovered.

As I read The King Must Die, I thought it was interesting to see that even though some women were so important in religion and royal women were treated with reverence, women were so badly used in other ways. During the many wars, men tore around raping and stealing women. Theseus was the prime example. His palaces are filled with slave women that he uses at will.

Actually, many of the women in the story seemed fairly slutty, falling all over the handsome young men, giving them jewelry, and inviting them to their rooms etc. (Theseus was pretty hot, I must admit!)

Actually, now that I think about the frequent sexual affairs in the book, they often were between men. It seems that homosexuality was very accepted in Theseus' society. From the little I've read about it, I think homosexuality was more accepted in ancient Greece than in America today.

Well, I'm totally rambling. I'm signing off.

Marni

DeeW
May 12, 2005 - 11:03 am
Marni, I think what you call "rambling" is truly the kind of thinking Renault would want us to do. She obviously wants us to re-examine our inherited beliefs about religion and sexuality and find out that in different times and cultures, people thought differently. I too find it contradictory that in Theseus's time, women were treated like chattel unless they happened to be royals or priestess. You would think that they would command more respect but as Renault points out, once the truth about conception became known, women lost their mysterious power. I'm tempted to laugh tho, at the idea of men being so gullible. Didn't it ever occur to them that sex had anything to do with pregnancy ? Apparently not. On second thought, the novel The Clan of the Cave Bear makes it clear that women didn't quite understand it either. So, here I am rambling too!

Stigler
May 12, 2005 - 11:11 am
In discussing the role of women in the book, I am reminded of the fact that among some of the native American tribes, the lineage was traced through the mother, not the father. And that really does make more sense. It would be hard to deny who your mother was.

Judy

Mippy
May 12, 2005 - 01:55 pm
Has anyone considered that the king who must die is Aegeus, not Theseus? This is not giving away any
part of the plot, as it is all spelled out in Hamilton or in the web links listed in early posts.

Marni: I know that you consider King Must Die as fiction, but I was trying to emphasize that the Iliad is actually fiction, not history. That is true although archeologists have found ancient Troy.
Most of the places Theseus visits are real places, also.
But the Renault version of the bull dancers is so very vivid that we could easily imagine those events taking place, events which are all the creation of a most gifted novelist!

Stigler: That was a timely reminder that the family line is through the mother in American Indians. This is comparable to time of the the Greeks about which we are reading, where the mother could claim anyone as the father, even one of the gods. In Hamilton's myths, there is no question that King Aegeus is his father, not anyone else, after the special sword is shown to the king. The only role Theseus' mother had was to tell her
son when he was old enough to lift the stone. Her role was not to name the true father.

marni0308
May 12, 2005 - 03:15 pm
I've read about how some pre-historic native American indian tribes were matriarchal. And I've read the Jean Auel series about pre-historic Europeans and how many clans were matriarchal. I wonder why it changed in many cases. Do you think it had anything to do with owning property? Early people were usually nomadic, I believe, wandering from place to place to find food and shelter. Many were not even particularly territorial. Did the domestication of animals and the development of agriculture and resulting ownership of land lead to the evolution of societies from matriarchal to patriarchal?

Marni

marni0308
May 12, 2005 - 03:23 pm
Mippy: I agree that Aegeus was a king who must die. Another member commented that Theseus was the king who must die.

I think we see a bunch of kings who must die. We've already seen the King Horse must die. (I think there is a relationship between him and Theseus.) And we've seen the Kerkyon must die unless he kills his opponent who dies in his place. Anyone who knows the Theseus legend knows we're in store for some others. There are kings of various kinds all over the place. And we're all expecting Theseus to take his father's place as king one day. So Aegeus must die. And then we'll wonder when King Theseus must die.

Traude S
May 12, 2005 - 06:36 pm
This is my first opportunity to post today. I had a doctor's appointment in the morning and major cleaning in the afternoon.

To my dismay I also found that the text on my monitor is not centered but veers toward the right, with the last words in every line tumbling off. One way out is the shifting of the arrows at the bottom right, but it is time-consuming.

This has happened in B&L before and was subsequently corrected. And that will happen in this case also, I hope. In the meantime please bear with me.

It is gratifying to see the posts, thank you all. I will refer to them in due course.

To reiterate and clarify what I said before:
The King Must Die and the seven other books on ancient Greece by Mary Renault are fiction, they are historical novels, told boldly and creatively, recreated from legends, i.e. myths, based solely on tradition. There is no absolute truth.

As shown in Hamilton's "Mythology", there is more than one version of a story about a hero or an important event, written by different poets in different centuries - but all following ORAL tradtion.

Renault has literally breathed life into Theseus who must have inspired her as much as Alexander the Great - see her trilogy "Fire from Heaven" (1969), "The Persian Boy" (1972), "Funeral Games" (1981). All are brilliant historical reconstructions, but reconstructions nonetheless. She added to and gave her own interpretation of historical figures, and that is the prerogative of an author.

I believe the book we are discussing is meant to glorify an ancient hero and his achievements; she retells his life, the good things and the mistakes. Religion and rituals are part of the hero's life but not the main topic of the story, IMHO.

Theseus' story gains momentum in Book Three, Athens, and especially when he volunteers to be part of the group of Greek youths sent to Crete as a tribute to Poseidon. Much can be gleaned from Book Four about the customs and the culture of Crete and a decadent society, seemingly in decline.

It is worth being mentioned also that different sources give varying data regarding the frequency of the periodic tributes of youths.

More later.

Leah4Swim
May 13, 2005 - 04:11 pm
I can add that among Jewish people, again it is the mother who passes the inheritance to the child. Hence, if the mother belongs to a particular "tribe" then her offspring are of the same tribe. Of course in our modern society, children inherit physical properrty and/or money from their father. As for the book, I have not quiet finished reading it but it's due at the library tomorrow, so I'll be up late, reading.

Scrawler
May 13, 2005 - 04:20 pm
I know that my Greek grandmother on my mother's side ruled her house with an iron fist. Even my grandfather, the patriarch of our family did not argue with my grandmother who stood 4 feet 2 inches tall. Grown men cowered before her. In a Greek family, the women didn't leave the home. My grandfather even did the grocery shopping perhaps more because he was a grocer and knew the best buys. Only once did my Greek grandmother, who could not speak English, leave the house and that was when Roosevelt and Dewey were in the election race for president. She always liked Roosevelt; so she went out and voted for him since my grandfather was making noises that he thought Dewey would win. There's always been a family legend that Roosevelt won because of my grandmother's vote. Even my Irish grandmother on my father's side ruled her house.

I think the early Christian church had a great influence over whether or not women had more influence over their lives and the lives of their families. But there were many places were women were more prevalent.

My husband was born and raised on a Navaho reservation because his father worked as a butcher for the U.S. Army. He saw first hand what it was like to live under a matriarch society. When the U.S. armies in the 1800s slaughtered women and children this was something that the Indian men could not understand. To Indians the woman is sacred because without women their very existence will cease to exist. This feeling was even prevalent in the 1940s and 50s when my husband was living with the Navaho tribe.

In ancient British Isles, the women fought next to the men. The women would fight naked and paint their bodies so they blended with the forests that they fought in.

Did anyone see the special on the Da Vinci Code? CBS had it on when they first aired "Revelations." I thought it was very interesting. One of the things they pointed out was that in the picture of the "Last Supper" if you look closely, the people in the picture spell out the word "Da Vinci." According the experts that were on the program, most of the book was pure fiction, but cleverly done. For example, according to the history books there really was a secret society that existed during the time period the author wrote about, but there is no written evidence that Jesus was married or that he had children. I like Dan Brown's books, but I thought that "Digital Fortress" was his best.

marni0308
May 13, 2005 - 06:25 pm
When I read the Da Vinci Code, I checked out the corresponding pictures on the book's official website, as indicated in the paperback. I was so flabbergasted when I looked at Da Vinci's painting of The Last Supper to see what the person on Jesus' right side looked like. I had always assumed the people there were the disciples. But, the person was very obviously a woman. So, I checked out other sites to look at the painting in other places, thinking that maybe the painting had been adjusted on the book's site. Nope. Da Vinci really painted a woman.

Traude S
May 13, 2005 - 07:43 pm
My "centering" problem has been resolved, thank goodness.

Mention of Dan Brown's supremely successful "The Da Vinci Code" is not surprising in the context of historical fiction.

And Renault's work IS historical fiction; it has also been called "mythological fiction". Mary Renault has built her books around the existing legends and added to them, prodigiously.

"Renault" was a pseudonym. She was born in London in 1905, the daughter of a doctor, as Elaine Mary Challens (also spelled ChallAns). She was bookish, withdrawn and intensely private throughout her life.

In 1947 she won an award from MGM for $150,000 and shortly thereafter left England with her lifelong companion, Julie Mullard, never to return. She lived in South Africa for a time and joined Black Sash, the women's movement at the forefront in the fight against apartheid. Disillusioned with radical politics, she traveled extensively, especially to Greece, and turned to a fictional world of her own creation.

She wrote sympathetically and with candor about the male world of Ancient Greece, about love between men, and became a standard bearer of the sexual revolution. Only one biography exists of her, as far as can be determined. Renault knew J.R.R. Tolkien when she was a student at Oxford and before he wrote "The Hobbit". He admired her work. She died in 1983.

We have yet to analyze the person and the character of Theseus as portrayed by Renault, and, later, to determine how well she succeded.



P.S. This afternoon I attended a luncheon of the Women's Guild of my church. One of the women asked me what I was currently reading. Of course I mentioned "our" book. She delightedly exclaimed, "Oh my, I have read all of Renault's books when I was in high school!"

marni0308
May 13, 2005 - 09:05 pm
Recently I read the book Valley Forge, written by McKinley Cantor and published in 1975. I loved it and passed it on to my son. He noticed on the paperback's cover that Mary Renault was one of the authors who was quoted to promote the sale of the book. (My son knew I was reading The King Must Die at the time.) I hadn't even noticed!

marni0308
May 13, 2005 - 09:22 pm
I'm seeing several comments about how Renault's work is fiction, not proven history. I am not seeing in our discussion group's comments that anyone believes the book is real history. I hope we are able to compare things in a book of fiction with things that really happen without causing a problem.

DeeW
May 14, 2005 - 08:40 am
Marni, I don't see that it should be a problem. Of course we know that Renault's books are fiction, based on legend. But for that matter, how much of the Legends are actually factual? It doesn't matter to me, as I admire Renault's writing and the way she can bring a character to life. I've been slowly savoring the part of the book where Theseus and the other captives are sailing to Crete, and beginning to come to terms with the reality of their fate. It's one of the most vivid pieces of literature I've ever read. I feel Theseus's shocking realization that he is no longer a King, or a King's son, but a mere slave like the others whose life has little or no value to his owners.

Scrawler
May 14, 2005 - 11:48 am
"Why be angry? I am a wolf in a dog-pack here...Men come and go, they say, but the belly carries the child. I should know no good to strive for byond this, to be chosen for the Mother, to quicken a woman and to die; I should not ask to outlive the height of my fortune. Why am I angry, then? Is it because I am a Hellene that the blood about my heart says to me, "There is something more? Yet what it is I do not know, nor whether there is a name for it. It may be there is some harper, the son and the son's son of bards, who knows the word. I only feel it about my heart; it is a brightness, and it is a pain."

I thought this was a very interesting paragraph. Theseus is angry, but at what he does not know. What do you think he is angry about? He reasons that: "[he] should know no good to strive for beyond this..." But is there something that we should strive for beyond "love and death" and if so what is it?

marni0308
May 14, 2005 - 02:17 pm
Scrawler: What section is that in?

marni0308
May 14, 2005 - 02:18 pm
Interesting things always seem to happen when Theseus gets angry. I found an Athens situation interesting when he got angry.

During the lottery to select the youth for Crete tribute, Theseus thought he had a 1 in 30 chance of being selected. Then, when he realized that his father had not submitted his name on a ballot, he felt Aegeus had mocked Poseidon. Theseus was really mad at Aegeus. Theseus asked Poseidon to "show him what to give." And Poseidon answered. Theseus knew then he was obligated to submit his own name, making him a definite pick for Crete.

But Theseus didn't really want to go to Crete where certain death waited. "Now when I saw before me the certain thing, sorrow fell black upon my eyes and the sun grew cold.....And I thought, "The god cannot mean it. He sent me here to be King.'"

Theseus then did something totally unlike himself. (I thought this was really interesting.) Theseus pleaded with Poseidon to change his fate, to let him stay in Athens so he didn't miss out on things he wanted to do. "Father Poseidon, take something else from me. I will not ask to live long, if I can make a name and be remembered in Athens. Now it will be as if I had never been born. If you want my life, let me die here in battle, and leave some record, a bard's song and a tomb......Lord Poseidon, I will give you my horses, the best I ever had. Take anything but this."

But, Theseus could feel Poseidon leaving him then. So, Theseus pulled himself together, felt the god return, and fear fell from him. He said, “The consenting sets one free.” (Like the King Horse, Theseus consents to his death.)

At that point, Theseus submitted his own named ballot in exchange for the last ballot that had been selected.

Traude S
May 14, 2005 - 05:38 pm
It was inevitable that Theseus would offer himself for sacrifice in Crete even though he thought his moira was to become King of Athens (which he eventually did, of course).

Yet he felt a personal, intimate connection with the god and believed to be the god's son. It is plausible to speculate (as Renault may have done) that Theseus hesitated only momentarily because he sought the god's approval of his plan. I believe it was not cowardly hesitancy and withdrawal was not on his mind.

I echo what GOSSETT said about the writing; it is incredibly vivid, engaging all the reader's senses. In places it is poetic. It is particularly astonishing how perfectly she, a woman, describes the thought processes and actions of a man. That will become more apparent in Book Four. What takes place on Crete is really the heart of the matter, as we will see.

Traude S
May 14, 2005 - 05:53 pm
I remember a similar overwhelming feeling of astonishment two years ago, when our local book group discussed Midwives by Chris Bohjalian.

Not only the two nurses in the group but all of us were amazed how vividly, credibly and accurately the author, a male, described the birthing process. To achieve that is fine writing!

Traude S
May 14, 2005 - 06:23 pm
Among the many excellent references available on the web is one that I am linking here.

Scroll down to the pictures. There are "related articles" as well.
http://atheism.about.com/library/FAQs/religion/blgrk_athens.htm

Judy Shernock
May 14, 2005 - 11:45 pm
We should remember that Theseus is still very young and often does things by instinct without thinking of possible consequences. Every time Theseus makes an impulsive decision the plot shifts.

I am beginning to see that this characteristic of Theseus is the one the author uses to twist the plot to the next scene of action. Therefore Theseus's impulsiveness is the way to keep the plot at high Drama so that the action, at least up till now, is non stop.

I wonder what twists will occur as he grows older and more settled in his actions. What does Renault have up her sleeve? Undoubtedly something clever.

Stigler
May 15, 2005 - 06:53 am
Traude, thank you for that interesting link. I am truly enjoying this discussion. The book itself is very interesting. Reading about the actions and motivations of the characters at that time and in that setting is interesting and then there are the interesting supplemental links where we learn even more.

Thank you again for leading this discussion. And thanks to each of you for contributing your ideas.

I keep thinking about how young Theseus actually is and to me, that explains many of his actions. A young man often acts impulsively and also does things he really may not want to do but fears to look "less of a man" or "lose honor" in the opinions of his peers.

Judy

Scrawler
May 15, 2005 - 07:59 am
Marni0308: "Why be angry?" can be located in Eleusis, Chapter 3, page 97.

Eleuis, Chapter 3, page 103:"I went over and stood before him. My anger had left me; I saw his hurt was mortal. he said, "The oracle spoke true. You are the chick of the cuckoo, sure enough." Now at the last he looked puzzled, like a boy. He figured the spear that stood in his side, with the captain holding the shaft, and said, "Why did they do it? What did they gain?" He meant that they would have got my booty, if I died. I said to him, "Our ends are written from the beginning, and my time too will come." He answered bitterly, "But mine is now." Then I was silent, for it is a thing there is no answer to."

I thought this was one of the most profound and vivid paragraphs written in this book. You can feel the pain of both men. And no I don't think there is an answer as to why men [and women] die when they do. You might think that in some occupations men will be more exposed and therefore might die sooner: such as soldiers and murderers, but what about the thousand of children that die each other. It is their deaths that I have no answer for and wish I could question.

There is one thing about this paragraph that puzzles me though. What do you think: "The oracle spoke true. You are the chick of the cuckoo..." means?

marni0308
May 15, 2005 - 10:54 am
Scrawler: Re the chick of the cuckoo: I just read a brief article about cuckoos by James Owen for National Geographic News, May 2, 2005. Owen writes:

"Cuckoos live what seem to be lives full of deception and murder. As adults, they lay their eggs in the nests of other birds. (Why raise your own chick, when you can dupe others into doing the work for you?) Female cuckoos typically lay a single egg. When these interlopers hatch, they promptly push the other eggs out of the nest, killing the host birds' true offspring."

I wonder if Xanthos, in his bitterness before dying, was comparing Theseus to this "interloper," who pushed Xanthos out of his position in Eleusis and killed him.

It sounds as though an oracle predicted that this would happen.

marni0308
May 15, 2005 - 03:09 pm
Scrawler: I wonder if Theseus is angry at this point because of the way his wife, the queen, acts as Theseus prepares to go off to battle. When he smiles at her, "she only lay still and heavy, her MOUTH SMILING WITHOUT HER EYES........But as everyone knows, it is neither good nor wise for a man to go off to war bad friends with his wife, and least of all for a king. So I did not ask why she lay there, when she should have been dressed to see me off...."

She is acting strangely. Later, Theseus finds out that she has betrayed him. (Of course, not long before this scene, she had stabbed him because he was changing the rules and roles in Eleusis.)

Traude S
May 15, 2005 - 07:19 pm
Thank you for your wonderful posts, MIPPY, MARNI, SCRAWLER, STIGLER, GOSSETT, JUDY SHERNOCK, LEAH (have I forgotten someone, I hope not). We have branched out quite a bit and it is hard to give every post its due, but I'll try.

As for the title and to what king it applies, or which king is meant, I submit that it may apply to more than one king.
There is Kerkyron whom Theseus replaces. Theseus is made to carry the very same name and mightly resents it.
In Book Four, as we will see, the young King of Naxos, all of sixteen years old, is fated to die, and he knows it. His queen is "old" in Theseus' eyes (she is 30). And the title includes Aegeus, of course.

Yes, Theseus is extremely concerned with his person, his honor, his standing as son of a king. When someone does not show proper respect, he is quick to anger. Sometimes it is righteous anger, as when he dispatches the bandits along the Isthmus Road. He deals with them swiftly and in the same manner in which they had killed their victims.

But he never boasts, he always shows respect to the gods. He is aware that he needs to be cleansed after killing Xanthos, Persephone's treacherous brother. That, providentally, is his way OUT of Eleusis where the queen had intended to keep him until his time was up.

She has two young children, Theseus notes. When he leaves Persephone for good, he wonders whether she might possibly have been pregnant with a child of his. Doubtless a reason for pride. He casually refers to children whom he had fathered in the countryside.

Physical beauty was valued prized highly in ancient Greece, a protracted war fought over Helen of Troy! Men have always been susceptible to women's wiles, but at the end of the day it has always been, and still is A MAN's WORLD, AND A WOMAN'S PLACE (that is the title of a book by Elizabeth Janeway.)
But was there any real power sharing - to use a modern term - between men and women in ancient Greece ? Or anywhere since? Isn't a woman often only an adornment for the man by her side? Haven't we heard of "trophy wives" ?(In A Man in Full by Tom Wolfe, for example!)

Also, not so long ago women in Europe were considered chattel who could not legally own property! In that respect we HAVE come a long way since!

MARNI, the cuckoo is a common bird in Europe and his call can be heard all summer in rural wooded areas. Children play a game with the bird and imitate his calls, waiting for an answer. That's what my cousins and I did when I visited my grandfather's farm - a lifetime ago.

The female cukoo lays only one large egg and places it in another bird's nest. Everything that's in there is thrown out in the process. That is rather crafty for a bird to think of, wouldn't you agree? Crafty and cunning or "furbo", the Italians call it. Not my definition of "crazy" !!

SCRAWLER, my grandchildren were here this afternoon and I haven't had time to check the text for the paragraph on the cuckoo's nest you quoted. Do you have the page number handy, per chance?

This is getting too long and I'll write more tomorrow.

Scrawler
May 16, 2005 - 08:17 am
"The oracle spoke true. You are the chick of the cuckoo, sure enough." P.109

Thanks Marni0308 for your explanation of the "cuckoo." Perhaps Xanthos thought that Theseus claimed the throne by deciption after he pushed everyone else out.

Athens, page 114:

"Madam, you kow I have killed your brother. Do you know why?"

She answered in a voice as empty as the shore, "Who can give the lie to you, now he is dead?"

"What is the punishment fo killing the King out of season? Yet I killed him in battle, and have brought him back for burial, because I would not dishonor your kin. His men do not think I wronged him. As you see, they let be led them home."

"She said, "What am I, then? The captive of your spear? Now anger warmed the paint upon her cheeks; I saw her gilt-tipped breasts rise and fall. Yet at her words, my mind turned from her to the girl Philona..."

Sounds like the latest episode of "All My Children." Theseus kills the queen's brother, now he awaits his punishment, but even as he waits he's not thinking of the queen with her "gilt-tipped breasts", but of another woman."

So what was the role of women in ancient Greece? I suppose first off the most important role of women in an ancient matriarchal society was to produce a heir. But as we have seen in this novel, there were queens who ruled sometimes alone and sometimes in their husband's absence when the men went into battle. But what of the role of the peasant? Was her role any different than the queen's, except that she did not rule a country, but only the hearth of a home and was that any less of a responsibility than a queen's? After all a country is only composed of hundreds of individual hearths.

Traude S
May 16, 2005 - 03:06 pm
SCRAWLER, yes, I think that is exactly what the dying Xanthos meant, Theseus was the chick of a cuckoo placed in the "nest" of Eleusis. The queen herself tells Theseus (pg.64)
"But some," she said", are called to a higher destiny. As you are, stranger, who come here fulfilling the omens, on the day when the King must die." (emhasis mine)
For his part, Theseus has no idea what lies in store for him: i.e. only one year as nominal king, guarded every waking minute except in the bedchamber, named Kerkyron like all his predecessors; all of them with a merely titular, non-leading position, perhaps to spawn an heir, time permitting. And then death by the hand of his chosen succssor.

Surely Theseus has no grand design on Eleusis at this time. It was to be only a way station on his path to Athens. Yet Persephone seems afraid early when she "looked into my eyes as if to read an omen; and in hers I saw fear"... . (emphasis mine)

In Hamilton's accounts in "Mythology", based on the sources she researched (which included Greek dramas, notably the tragedies by Eurupudes), there is no mention that Eleusis passed through Eleusis, much less that he was king.

That may well be her addition, her literary invention, like her alternative spelling of names and the use of "Minyan" as in the description of one of one of the Guard ", who was small and swarthy and Minyan all through", (pg. 85) especially since Minoan is used elsewhere in the text to describe exactly the same ethnical attributes.

Theseus is certainly pious and, before undertaking the killing of Phaia, remembers that "these beaste are sacred in Eleusis." (also on pg. 85)

On pg. 81, the fourth full paragraph tellingly describes man-to-man friendship. It starts with "I got them parted, and let it go as foolery." Same paragraph: "When a man lives like this, a youth he can choose for himself, who looks up to him and copies him and boasts of his friendship, will give him more pride in himself than the womenfolk at home. I see no sense in looking down on this; most customs have a reason; even among Hellenes, in a long war where girls are scarce and the leaders are first served, the young men's friendships grow tenderer than they were.

There is another hint of this on pg. 91. Phaia is killed; Theseus and his Companions have feasted by the fire together with Pylas, the son of King Nisos of neighboring Megara, and his men.

"The fire crumbled; ... I could see more than one of my Minyans lying awake to watch if he (Pylas) would make love to me." Then this, "Next morning when we all set off home, he gave me his gold-rimmed cup as a guest gift. The Companions stared, and wondered if they had stayed awake long enough."

There is another reference on pg. 101, in the third full paragraph. "Two of my boldest lads, whe were wron lovers, took hold of the chariot ..."

It speaks well for Theseus that he promised to give Xanthos a burial, rather than leaving his body to the vultures. And his treatment of Philona, part of his share of the spoils of the conflict, is compassionate. This serves to enhance Theseus stature in the reader's eyes.

Greece had numerous city-states and autonomus communities of varying sizes, all governed in their respective tradition(s). Matriarchal rule was not universal: Athens for exampole had a king, and he was certainly not a puppet.

Judy Shernock
May 16, 2005 - 09:50 pm
I don't have much background in Greek History so I went looking in the library. After brousing a while I chose the Time-Life Book "What Life Was Like At The Dawn of Democracy".There are many, many illustrations;all photos from Greek Art, Pottery and Sculptor. There are Maps and photos of the sites we are reading about. Also a short history of Theseus, a long glossary and many many suggestions for further resources for those seeking specific information.

Perhaps others did this research in the past. For me this is new and adds immeasurably to the enjoyment of reading the novel.

Check it out.

Scrawler
May 17, 2005 - 07:40 am
One of the things I enjoy most about Mary Renault's books is her imagery.

"The last sunlight on the wall had turned rose-red; and in the wicker cage the white bird was making its feathers warm for sleep." (p.114)

"There was a bracelet on her wrist, of a coiled gold snake. She tugged at it..." (p.115)

"She tugged again at the bracelet. She looked like a woman pulled two ways at once." (p.115)

"Then she turned to me like the cat who shows her sharp teeth and curled tongue." (p.115)

"The last dull stain of light was quenched upon the wall; the hills were gray, only the highest peak was flushed like the breast of a maiden. The bird's feathers were as soft as wool, and its head well hidden." (p.116)

As you can see Renault's descriptions of animals and nature's beauty contrast with the anger of the queen. She even contrasts the bird slowly going to sleep in the "last dull stain of light" to the queen's cat like sharp teeth. Don't you think this style of writing adds to the our understanding of the novel.

Traude S
May 17, 2005 - 07:24 pm
SCRAWLER, yes, the writing is incredibly evocative. There are many felicitous phrases, some of which I quoted before, similes and metaphors (non mixed !!).

JUDITH, I fully agree with you. It is a wonderful feeling to have and hold a book; may we always have them! The web is a marvelous invention, a technical advance without which we couldn't live any more. It provides instant access at any time.

But I have come across a lot of information that was plain wrong. Some was semi-factual, some embroidered with the anonymous poster's immaterial (sometimes salacious) comments. I'm glad you found the Time-Life series. The books are well written and illustrated, and they are reliable.

Greek mythology is complex not only because of the sheer number of deities, earth gods, sky gods, heroes, all of whom the Romans adopted, but giving them new names; but also because the legends vary, as I have already said- depending on the source and the source's time period.

The assignment for this week, Book Three, Athens, is still an introductory part of the story, and its culmination comes in the events that take place in Crete. A great deal happens there, several new important chracters are introduced, and I want to make sure we give Books Four and Five their just due in thoroughness and time.

In the interest of saving time I will pose no questions on Book Three but instead guide the discussion in the order of the narrative in chapters 1-3. I hope you will consent to this proposed course of action and count as always on your valuable comments and interpretation. Thank you.

to be continued

Mippy
May 18, 2005 - 04:21 am
Traude,
What questions are posed? In which post? Could you clarify?
I have time to post,but have lost track of what the area of discussion is supposed to be.
I have finished the book, but will not "give away" the last part.
I'm now in the middle of reading The Bull from the Sea, which I truly
recommend to all readers of the first book, King Must Die.

Traude S
May 18, 2005 - 05:55 am
MIPPY, I posed generalized questions in my # 62 an # 83. They do not appear in the header.

The Header shows the Reading Schedule for the first three weeks. We began officially on May 1 with Book One, dealt with Book Two during the week of May 8 and we are now, as of May 15, discussing Book Three, Athens.

I said last night that I would raise no questions regarding Book Three and instead refer to the events described in it, all narrated chronologically. I would welcome it, however, if we could get to Book Four, Crete, a day or two earlier, because it is longer and full of events and intrigue.

My concern here is not that anything could be "given away" prematurely. This is a historical novel about a known legend. The book contains no surprise elements. Several people have read it before and some read all of it this time, which is perfectly fine with me and something I prefer to do myself.

Besides, Mary Renault herself has a curious way of prophesying what is yet to come in the (far) future - one example are the changes Theseus brought about in Eleusis. Surely a centuries-old system of matriarchal rule could not be changed overnight!

Comnversely, somethings, like the omens and oracle ad curses, are referred to again after their first mention and should be clearly understood in all their implications.

Yet I repeat that the heart of the story lies in Crete and I'd like to "get there" as expeditiously as possible.
You are absolutely right about "The Bull from the Sea". And don't you agree it reveals a more mature Theseus?

I hope this clarifies things.

Mippy
May 18, 2005 - 06:32 am
What a good answer, Traude; will reread posts #62 and #83.
Yes, the Bull from the Sea gives us a King Theseus who is "to die for."
No wonder the maidens all swoon over him. And yet he hesitates to marry. Guys like that show up in the modern world all the time, right?
I agree the heart of the matter is the bull-ring. After I return from morning errands, I'll try to find some links.

Stigler
May 18, 2005 - 06:44 am
Traude, I have finished the book and it was interesting to the end. Although I do have some questions about the ending (when we get to that point). I agree with you that the heart of the book is what happens in Crete and in the bull-ring.

Judy

Scrawler
May 18, 2005 - 08:07 am
"I picked up the winecup and lifted it to drink. As my mouth touched it, I felt it plucked from my hands. Hot wine spilled on my face and splashed my clothing. The gold cup struck the painted floor tiles ringing, and made a spreading pool. A thick lees tricked from it, darker than the wine.

...I saw the sword uncovered at my side. "I should have spoken," I thought. "How ill I have done all this! The shock has stunned him." I took his arm and said, "Sit down, sir. I am sorry. In one more moment I would have told you everything."

I drew him toward his chair. He grasped the chair back, and stood there out of breath. As I leaned over him, thinking what more to say, the white boarhound came padding in from the balcony, and licked the spilled wine. He started forward, and dragged it back by the collar. I heard the rustle and chinking of a woman's ornaments; the priestess Medea, whom in her stillness I had forgotten, was shaking her head at him. It was then that I understood.

Hemlock is not so cold, nor verjuice so stinging, as the touch of that knowledge was upon my heart. I stood like stone; when the woman led the dog to the door, and slipped away with it, I let her go without raising a hand. The King leaned on his chair head, as if only that kept him from falling. At last I heard his voice, harsh and low as a death-rattle. "You said nineteen. You said you were nineteen." (p.119)

To tell a lie is to tell an untrue statement. There are big lies and little lies. But as we see here even a small lie can have treacherous results. But who was lying to whom? If Medea was a witch, than it is probably certain that she already knew who Theseus really was. She encouraged the King to kill Theseus even though she knew full well who he was. Why do you suppose she wanted to do that? Was she afraid that Theseus would eventually be come king of Athens upsurging her own children? Did she wish to harm the king himself, so that she could take over the kingdom? Or was she perhaps fullfilling an omen from the gods themselves. This is after all a Greek tragedy and perhaps this paragraph is there simply as a foreshadowing of events to come in Theseus's adult life.

Mippy
May 18, 2005 - 09:17 am
Looking for a link to the bull dancers, I found a general link to Greek mythology,
and another link about King Aegeus, and other myths
(sorry if this repeats any earlier material)


Theseus Myth

King Aegeus

Traude S
May 18, 2005 - 02:06 pm
MIPPY, SITGLER, SCRAWLER, thank you for your posts. I have not had time to mull over them or view the links, but I would like to answer STIGLER, now.

STIGLER, regarding the ending: the reader knows what it is, the legend tells us plainly; the Aegean Sea is named after Aegeus. (I don't understand why Renault saw fit to change the spelling of his, and a few other names. Literary license, of course.)

But please let's get to Crete first and then tackle the ending and get to what we think or how we feel about Renault's interpretation of it. There are other things I would like to question, besides.

Back later.

Traude S
May 18, 2005 - 06:57 pm
Things to consider
Curses
-- The curse of Aegeus is mentioned by the Queen of Eleusis and by the courier on his return from Athens.
Medea is mentioned in the courier's report for the first time, not by name yet but as "the Cunning One, the Scythian Witch".

-- Medea puts a temporary "charm" on Theseus as she makes her escape from the palace.

-- The "cold curse" put on any man in Eleusis who would Theseus pass (on his return from Athens).

Omens
-- Omens and oracles were of paramount importance for the Greeks. Temples were built to individual gods, Apollo for example, the most famouns in Delphi. Priestesses in trance would convey a message to the suppliants who came from all over the known world.
But don't modern people still hold superstitions?

-- Intrigues and treachery
The evil plans hatched by the Queen of Eleusis and Xanthos; the complicity of Medea. It was she who convinced Ageus that Kerkyron of Eleusis was out to take his place on the throne, it was her idea to poison him.

-- From reading between Theseus' lines the reader can well imagine that the relationship between father and son cannot have been all smooth and easy, and how could it have been otherwise in their circumstances? Surely there was affection, though.

-- As young as he is, Theseus displays a great deal of wisdom and diplomacy and goes about doing things in Eleusis (later) as he sees fit without asking for approval before or after. First though he brings the Eleusinians to Athens, a thousand strong, and they fight the Pallantids alongside the Athenians and share the spoils, slaves and women included.

-- We might keep in mind Medea's prophesy for Theseus (pg. 130) ...

-- The size of the kingdom is doubled after the war. But when Theseus mentions the possibility of a loose alliance, a sharing of common interests, with the neighboring "men of good blood", the idea falls on deaf ears.

Twice we are told in this chapter that Aegeus was "tight-fisted", but Renault does not give us proof, nor an antecedent.

She also changes the legend of Medea to suit the purposes of this novel, which, of course is her prerogative.

I wonder about the terms "barons" and especially "gentleman" - the latter sounds too British and IMHO more than a little incongruent for Greek heroes.

Please comment at your leisure.

to be continued

Judy Shernock
May 18, 2005 - 10:05 pm
While in Crete Theseus meets a member of the monotheistic religion; A Jew who beleives in "the God in the Sky".Renault presents nicely how this fellow laughs at the statue of the Goddess and claimed his people served no She Godess or any man made doll.

It is clear that the author has thought a lot about religion in general and how strange it must have been to the Greeks to have a God in the sky who has"neither father or mother , brother nor sister, wife nor child, but reigns".

We also find Theseus showing insight and self appraisal. Maturing as it were. In training he looks at Hippon and realizes "it was I, not he, who had been harming the team. He had found his nature for better or for worse, and might be good of his kind. If he was worked against the grain, he would be good for nothing."

Scrawler
May 19, 2005 - 08:06 am
"You did well by me, to put me in Poseidon's keeping. He has never forsaken me. When I have called on him he has always spoken."

"How?" I had never talked of it, and the words came slowly, but I said at last, "He speaks like the sea."

"Yes," he said. "That is the Erecthid token. It came when I was begetting you."

I waited, but he did not tell me of the other times; so I said, "How are we called, then at the end?"

"He calls us to a high place," my father said, "and we leap down to him. We go of ourselves."

When he said it, it seemed I had always known it. "That is better," I said, "than the Earthlings' way. One should go like a man, not like an ox." (p.133)

In this paragraph we see a forshadowing of what is to be later in the story. But it also brings up an interesting point. How did the ancient Greeks feel about suicide? We are taught in the Christian world that it is wrong to take one's own life, but in many other cultures it is considered an honorable way to die. I would have to agree with Theseus it is better to die like a man [or a woman] than to be taken like an ox to be slaughtered.

Does anyone know what is meant by: "the Erechthid token"?(p.133)

Traude S
May 19, 2005 - 04:10 pm
Erechthid (adj) is derived from Erechtheus, an early King of Athens, of the Royal House of Athens.

Erechtheus the First, the "earth-born king of Athens" (ref: Iliad), was thought to be the son of the goddess Gaia and raised by Athena, the patroness of Athens. He was also associated in his lifetime with Poseidon, god of the sea, and Cecrops, a mythical king of Athens, who was half man and half snake. According to one version of the legend, Erechtheus and Cecrops were one and the same, according to another Cecrops was the son of Erechtheus.

The term "Erechthid token" on pg. 133 refers, I believe, to the special connection between Poseidon and the descendants of Erechtheus, who can hear him "speak like the sea."

I have a few remaining thoughts on Book Three and will then post some questions about Book Four, Crete.

Thank you for your post, JUDY Shernock. There is much of interest in the chapters of Crete, and there is more about Hippon, too.

Scrawler
May 20, 2005 - 07:43 am
"Have you ever thought, sir of calling all the men of good blood together? Some things they must all want: to hold their lands, keep order, get in their tithes. In council, they might agree on a few laws for their common good. The craftsmen too, they all want a fair price for their labor, not to be beaten down to what the hungriest man will take; the farmers must need some working rule about boundaries and straying stock, and the use of the high pastures. If these three esates would each agree on some laws for their own sort, it would draw them together and break the pull of the clans. Then, if chief disputed with chief, or craftsman with craftsman, they would come to Athens. And in time there would be one law."

"One Law" the concept in Theseus's time must have seemed unreal as in our time the concept of having several kingdoms pulling one way and than the other seems unreal to us. And yet we could have had two United States existing side by side if it were not for a bloody American Civil War. Which brings up an interesting question. If two kingdoms could co-exist in the ancient times, than why can't two countries exist in our own time? Or will it take a wise king or chief to keep individual kingdoms or countries happy. Can two idealogies co-exist side by side without leading to war or discontent?

Traude S
May 20, 2005 - 03:24 pm
SCRAWLER, you asked a question of grave importance: "Can two idealogies coexist side by side without leading to war or discontent?"
Why don't we check into that?

First off, what Theseus said in the passage you quoted is "... agree on laws of their own sort (underlining mine),

which might not necessarily have been wholly or universally applied, just - ideally now - a "coming together" (the French call that rapprochement ), a "smoothing out at the edges", for mutual benefit.

But the course of the world indicates very plainly that this notion is purely utopian and will never become reality.

Nor did two kingdoms coexist in harmony for very long - if ever - before one invader or another came in and took by force what he fancied. The world has a long history of warfare; destruction and rebuilding are endlessly repeated, a process which continues to date.

You also asked, "Or will it take a wise king or chief to keep individual kingdoms or countries happy?"

Well, that depends. What makes an individual citizen or royal subject "happy", e.g. primarily food and secure shelter, is not necessarily what the king or chief envisages: His happiness may be of a quite different sort, like taking more land, filling his coffers with more riches, gaining more power and hence greater influence.

Even among partners believed to be equal, one may try to gain the upper hand --- it HAS happened.

But alliances have been formed before, notably in Europe, from the Middle Ages on, i.e. allegiances between nations, one of them was the famous Entente Cordiale, (literally Cordial Understanding) , formally titled the " Declaration between the United Kingdom and France Respecting Egypt and Morocco, Together with the Secret Articles Signed at the Same Time".

The signing took place on April 8, 1904, and the centenary in 2004 was greeted in France with the words "Voilà cent ans qu'on s'entend", freely translated as "There we are, one hundred years of understanding each other ".

We have had two world wars since.
Then came the Cold War- now ended, with the U.S. the only remaining superpower, and currently we are involved in a War against Terror, and our men and women are in Afghanistan and Iraq.

There are countries in the world where the pull of the clans still predominates.

Can two idealogies coexist without leading to war or discontent?

As for "discontent", if the discontent of individuals is meant, that, I fear, matters very little in the scheme of things.

My answer to the question has to be: No, not from my experience.

P.S. I'd like to add that, as you probably now, Europe has created a World Court, located in Brussels, Belgium, where war criminals, like Serbian Milosevic, are currently being prosecuted.
The United States has refused to become a member of that Court.

Traude S
May 20, 2005 - 08:15 pm
The information and the illustrations given in the link below may be useful in our reading of Book Four.


http://www.Labyrinthwork.com/article_CRETE.htm

Traude S
May 20, 2005 - 09:27 pm
Some concluding comments on Book Three.

-- An interesting exchange is narrated in the last par. on pg. 124 and the first par. on pg. 125, to wit

King Aegeus asks Theseus to read aloud his letter to the King and the astonished Theseus does so, thinking that the king's "sight was thick".
The King thanks him and says, "...Most I could read, but a few words I was not sure of." Theseus says, "I thought it was written fair." And the King then says, "Yes, yes, a good fair hand. Your scribe can write Greek; but he spells like a barbarian.

"I put down the letter as if it had bitten me. Not my face only, but even my midriff felt hot ..."
that's when he tosses the cloak from his shoulder, exposing the sword, which saved his life.

-- There is an ominous portend on page 151 = the crack in the stone balustrade of the terrace.

-- The detailed description of the Acropolis, the steep, rocky ascent and the great Hall is vivid and written with the love of someone who has seen the place, or what is left of it.

-- Early on in the book Cretans are described in a derogatory manner, their arrogance is cited more than once, their loose morals frowned at, their manners described as coarse, their short swarthy bodies endlessly commented on (and this by someone who was not tall himself!) There is more of that in Book Four.

The other day JUDY Shernock mentioned something significant from Book Four: Theseus writes about new bull dancers coming from all cornes of the earth (pg. 224), and, quite disparagingly, about"the son of wandering cattle herders in the back hills beyond Jericho", who did not believe in the Goddess but thought her only a doll men had made. He believed instead, says Theseus incredulously, only in the Sky Father and, stranger still, that it was unlawful to make (craven) images of Him.
Theseus considers him ignorant --- this is surely an early example of religious discrimination (!!)



Looking to the discussion of Book Four I'd like to ask the following questions

- Is the name "Cranes" a symbol?
- How did Theseus demonstrate his outstanding ability to lead?
- The unparalled bond he established between himself and every member of his extraordinary team, based solely on absolute trust and collective responsibility, was a crucial factor in their all staying alive in the bull ring time after time.
Would such a phenomenon be possible in today's self-absorbed world, I wonder?
- What traits/attributes does it take for a man and/or a woman to keep performing a life-threatening task from which there is no escape, over and over, in the face of decreasing chances and overwhelming odds?

Judy Shernock
May 20, 2005 - 10:20 pm
All the questions are intriguing. I chose to express thoughts on tne last. "What traits does it take to keep performing a life threatening task from which there is no escape?"

1)The person must feel that they are fighting a righteous battle. 2)Have pride in themselves and beleif in their cohor to stand by them till the death. 3)Beleif that a heroic death has meaning in this world.

I base this theory on the World War 2 Jewish fighters of the Warsaw Ghetto. These ordinary people smuggled in guns and made Molotov Cocktails (home made grenades) and took on the well equipped Nazi Army. Eventual death was a certainty but a heroic death meant something to them while being carted off to the Concentration Camps was a passive, meaningless death. All but a few died. the few that didn't were purposely sent out to spread the word of how they died. "Not like sheep to the slaughter but like brave men and women".

Stigler
May 21, 2005 - 06:14 am
Would such a phenomenon be possible in today's self absorbed world?

I would like to discuss this question.

I saw something last week that makes me think that it would be possible. My niece graduated from high school. The ceremony was held in the football stadium. The seniors lined up on the far side of the field and marched toward the stands where the friends and families were seated. They sat in chairs in front of the stands. At each end of their chairs was an empty chair. Each senior carried a rose. All of the girls placed their roses in one chair and the boys placed theirs in the other chair. We found out later that the chairs represented two students who had died. The girl died when the class was in the fourth grade. The boy died last year in an automobile accident. Had they lived, they would have graduated with this class. Half of the roses were given to the mothers of these two missing students. The classmates gathered the next morning and took the remaining roses and placed on the graves of the two.

This tells me that at least some of our young people do remember others and work together. I think a cohesive group like the Cranes would be possible.

Judy

Scrawler
May 21, 2005 - 08:33 am
"I was king and a king's heir," I thought as the ship cast her moorings. "Now I am a slave."

"...We belonged to the god, and had to be brought unspoiled. There was a guard all day on us, and a double guard all night, to see no one lay with the girls."

"It was a time of pause with me. I had passed from my own keeping. I lay in the god's hand, as once in boyhood, cradled on the sea."

"These things passed by me while I took my ease as one who hears the harper. "I am going to sacrifice," I told myself. "But Poseidon claimed me, who once was no man's son; and that is mine for ever."

From what I see in these paragraphs, Theseus has accepted his fate. Although we know from previous paragraphs that when Posidon calls, Theseus will chose his own death and dive down to him. It almost seems that he is giving up; at least for the moment. It is almost as if he is saying that he is already dead: "These things passed by me while I took my ease as one who hears the harper." At this point in story he is only thinking of himself.

What changes to make him come out of his self-absorption? It is when he sees the Cretian Captain with "the thin-lashed whip in his hand" ready to beat the fighting boys. "It woke me like mountain water." Now he is not thinking of himself; but thinking of others. And when he says: "Remember yourselves. Do you want to be beaten by a Cretan, before those slaves? Where is your pride?" He is now leading them.

Mippy
May 21, 2005 - 10:20 am
I'd like to follow-up to Judy's post, as I think the experience of the Jews during WWII came to mind for me, immediately, as well.
What trait, you ask? Love and devotion to family above an innate desire to survive, oneself. I cannot imagine whether I would have that ability, myself. I would hope so.
All the heroic acts during the Holocost also come to mind.
We have had a friend in the Chicago area who survived the horrors of the Warsaw ghetto as a very young child. He was scared for life. His mother perished, but somehow his father escaped with him, due to the heroic acts of some non-Jewish friends.
These people and others like them have been called "righteous gentiles" (gentile is a term given by Jews to people who are not Jewish, and is not taken to be a negative term) and they are among the true heros of the 20th century. Of course, I think of the Jews who were heros, too, the parents who died in order to save their children, and the children who went to their deaths, trying to smuggle messages out of the ghetto through the sewers, and who were caught and killed.
I hope no one minds getting off-topic here, but our DL did ask about heros. And this topic is right off the pages of my past. My grandparents to the end of their lives would not tell me the names of all our relatives who did not make it out of Poland and Germany.
Sorry if this is depressing. I shouldn't post on cold, rainy days.

Traude S
May 21, 2005 - 12:33 pm
STIGLER and JUDY SHERNOCK, your posts actually brought light into this gloomy rainy day.

Both your posts are relevant, both moving, both demonstrating a similar spirit under very different circumstances.

MIPPY, you are not off topic at all. I had asked the question, particularly in light of the passages on pp. 224-225, specifically the second full paragraph on pg. 224 ("All kinds of outlanders we got ...") up to the end of the first full paragraph on pg. 225 ("We were glad to see the last of him. The fingers of two hands would hardly count the gods he had offended ...". These statements about the "son of wandering cattle herders" are extremely insensitive and made me acutely uncomfortable. I could not help wonder whether these were Theseus' thoughts (only) ...

Any question that is brought here will be honestly and candidly discussed, with mutual repect, for nothing is more important today than courage in the line of fire, standing up and be counted, having the courage of one's convictions.

The heroic example given by the Jews in the Warsaw Ghetto will live on in memory as a shining example for bravery in the shadow of death, just as it has since it took place. By the same token, every single act of humanity, and reverence for the basic principle of goodness is worth applauding and emulating, like the genuine but generous gesture of the graduates in the hometown of STIGLER's niece.

We have to DO good so that it BE in the world, even though the world is increasingly hostile.

marni0308
May 21, 2005 - 10:39 pm
Re the question: The unparalled bond he established between himself and every member of his extraordinary team, based solely on absolute trust and collective responsibility, was a crucial factor in their all staying alive in the bull ring time after time. Would such a phenomenon be possible in today's self-absorbed world, I wonder?

I thought right away of military training and the experience of well-trained units led in wartime by true leaders. I've read of many thrilling true examples of land, amphibious, or naval units trained as teams to act instinctively in unison in times of repeated mortal danger, where every individual's effort is required for the safety of all, and where the units have learned to trust and depend on each other to stay alive.

We may have a self-absorbed world today, but there are certainly exceptions.

I think the key to the creation of absolute trust and collective responsibility is, as Traude pointed out, the bond established by the leader. Then, as the Cranes, practice, practice, practice.

Theseus necessarily would have quickly sacrificed anyone who could not be a total team player. That person would jeopardize the team and had to be quickly eliminated.

Traude S
May 22, 2005 - 09:58 am
Since I expect my grands, I am pressed for time now but want to answer the last post.

MARNI, yes the military is a good example.
But while military service requires teamwork, the essential duty is the defense of one's country.

In the case of the Cranes, however, Theseus had them take not one but two solemn vows to protect each others' lives like their own at all cost, i.e. solely in THEIR defense, as their only hope of surviving in the bull ring (longer).

Furthermore, it was not Theseus who chose the members of the team : they were already a team, having been picked by lot back in Athens, when Theseus volunteered, as we know.

Especially the second time around, some Cranes were more eager than others to swear to the even stronger oath. In the end they all did.

More later.

Scrawler
May 22, 2005 - 09:58 am
"The seas round Crete are dark blue almost to blackness, wild, bare, and empty. None of us had been before on water where one saw no land. There indeed man is a dust-grain in the palm of the god. But no one was awed except ourselves."

"Evening was falling. The sun girdled with purple was sinking in the burnished sea; eastward the first stars blinked in the cloud-rack. I stretched out my hand to Poseidon, but he sent no sign. He was away perhaps, shaking the earth somewhere. All about us I felt another power, dark, past man's thought, giver of desolation or of joy, she who can cherish or cast away but abides no question." (p.179)

Even in this ancient world, the force of nature could either destroy mankind or help mankind. Compared to nature's forces we are indeed merely "a dust-grain in the palm of the god." The ancient world believed in many gods because there was much they did not understand about the natural world around them. But what is our excuse? Do we understand more of the natural world and that is why we tend to ignore it? Although the world changes from time to time, what we see today around us was also seen in the ancient world. It is just that we have complicated matters so that it is harder to see with all the cement and contrete boxes we have put up. It is only during natural disasters like hurricanes, earthquakes, blizzards etc. that we remember that we are only "a dust-grain" that we realize that in order for mankind to exist; we must respect Mother Nature.

Traude S
May 22, 2005 - 10:18 am
Hello SCRAWLER, you and I posted at the same precise minute.

What is our excuse?, you asked.
Well,the answer might require a short essay.

1) Scientific opinion is sharply divided over the existence of Global Warming.

2) Wind farms have been proven successful as an alternative source of energy in the European north; in this country nobody wants them in his back yard = the NIMBY factor.

3) Why is there talk only of further drilling for oil but conservation never mentioned, let alone emphasized, as the most logical expedient to save energy AND money?

marni0308
May 22, 2005 - 10:39 am
One thing we see repeatedly in this section are acts of supreme bravery. Theseus, of course, is a prime example. He and the Cranes again and again risk their lives to save each other.

I have not personally seen acts of great courage and bravery in my life. I have seen examples on TV. I've seen films with examples from the past. But not in my own life.

My father recently told me a story of the bravest thing he every saw. He was a naval captain in World War II in the Mediterranean. At one point, another ship was accidentally crashing into my dad's ship. When they were very near each other, almost meeting, one of my dad's men fell overboard between the two ships. He was about to be squashed in the water. Another of my dad's men immediately jumped overboard. Somehow gaining superhuman strength, he pulled the fallen man up out of the water (about 25 feet deep) and threw him up and aboard his ship. Then, he somehow threw himself up, grabbed ahold, and pulled himself aboard just as the two ships crashed together.

My dad said that to this day he has no idea how the man could possibly have done it.

I wonder what it is that creates courage and acts of such bravery in some.

marni0308
May 22, 2005 - 09:40 pm
Re: Is the name "Cranes" a symbol?

Theseus selected the name "The Cranes" for the mixed group of men and women sailing together, taken as tribute to Crete to become bull dancers.

Theseus had the idea early on that if they had a group identity and acted as a team, they might have a better chance to survive. Theseus laid down the law: the group was "all one kindred," "children of one house," not to be recognized by rank, culture or sex. They would share everything.

Theseus understood that if the group had a name, it would help to establish the group identify. As Theseus spoke to the group about a name, Chryse spotted a "line of cranes, with long stretched necks and winnowing wings... crossing between the islands."

Theseus said it was an omen. "Cranes are dancers too; everyone knows the crane-dance...."

I think The Cranes was a wonderful name to symbolize the purpose of the team. Like the birds, The Cranes would gracefully and with great strength dance, work, and fly together as one whole. Like birds flying in formation, following the direction set by their leader, they could change position as needed so those who were fresher and stronger could take a role in the front, allowing those who were tired to draft as they regained their strength. Like the birds, their grace, beauty, strength, skill, and teamwork would stun their audiences, gain them accolades, and keep them alive.

Mippy
May 23, 2005 - 08:35 am
A search on cranes lead to the birds, Sandhill Cranes
which are found all around North America. We even had a pair
at a Federal bird sanctuary near our FL home, Loxahatchee Wildlife Reserve.
Here's the link:

Cranes

Scrawler
May 23, 2005 - 09:37 am
"And then, on a spur of the foothills that thrust into the plain, I saw for the first time the House of Ax. Picture to yourself all the kings' palaces you ever saw, set side by side and piled on one another. That will be a little house, beside the House of Ax. It was a palace within whose bounds you could have set a town. It crowned the ridge and clung to its downward slopes, terrace after terrace, tier after tier of painted columns, deep glowing red, tapering in toward the base, and ringed at head and foot with dark brilliant blue the Cretans love. Behind them in the noonday shadow were porticoes and balconies gay with pictured walls, which glowed in the shade like beds of flowers. The tops of tall cypresses hardly showed above the roofs of the courts they grew in. Over the highest roof-edge, sharp-cut agaisnt the deep-blue Cretan sky, a mighty pair of horns reared toward heaven.

"The sight winded me like a blow in the belly. I had heard travellers' tales third-hand, but pictured them in the likeness of what I knew. I felt like a goathered who comes in from the back hills and sees his first city." (p.191)

First off, I have to say I love the way Mary Renault creates an image with her descriptive sentences. And among such beauty suddenly Theseus sees: "Over the highest roof-edge, sharp-cut against the deep-blue Cretan sky, a mighty pair of horns reared toward heaven." The horns - the end of his journey. Earlier on page 190 Theseus states: Something came back to me. A feather seemed to brush the short hairs on my neck. But I said nothing to the others; it concerned my own moira only."

What was it that so concerned Theseus? Did he feel at this moment that he would meet his death; here in the house of Ax? Perhaps it was not the house itself, in all its beauty, that bothered him, but what was inside. Is that the way we all feel when facing something we do not understand and fear? Wasn't Roosevelt who said: "We have nothing to fear, but fear itself."

So even as Theseus felt that the sight of the house of Ax "winded me like a blow in the belly" he knew that deep within himself he could find the courage to overcome his fear not only for himself but also for the other Cranes.

DeeW
May 23, 2005 - 10:53 am
Marni, that was a beautiful posting about how cranes fly in formation and take turns in the stressful position of leadership. That's exactly the way Theseus and his team would work. If I'm not mistaken, Cranes also are a symbol in the Orient of eternal life or at least, long life. So, this gave them hope that they would somehow beat the odds and leave Crete alive someday. I too am enjoying the wonderful descriptive style of Mary Renault. Her writing stands out from the many hacks who are unfortunately, best sellers in our times.

marni0308
May 23, 2005 - 01:04 pm
Gossett: That is perfect if the crane is the symbol of long or eternal life!

Mippy: I enjoyed the Crane link. It got me thinking of the crane's dance as part of the mating process.

In a sense, The Cranes in our book were mating with each other by tying their lives together. They even swore an oath. Theseus said, "I swore them with a strong oath; for as it was, only misfortune bound us." And after taking the oath, Theseus had them "commend [themselves]...to Ever-Living Zeus, and to the Mother."

Traude S
May 23, 2005 - 05:01 pm
Things were very slow on the computer today, and that has made me late. Thank you for your posts, MARNI, MIPPY GOSSETT, SCRAWLER and for MARNI's link to Cranes. Many thanks to all of you for contributing.

There is an historical reference involving cranes in the legend of Ibycus. Ibycus was not a mythological character but a poet from Regium, Italy, who lived about 550 B.C. at the court of Polycrates, tyrant of Samos. Only a few fragments of his poems have come down to us. All we know of his person is the dramatic story of his death.

He was attacked by robbers near Corinth and mortally wounded. A flock of cranes flew by overhead and he called to them to avenge him. Soon after, over the open theater in Corinth where a play was being performed to a full house, a flock of cranes appeared and hovered above the crowd. Suddenly a man's voice was heard, crying out as if panic-stricken, "The Cranes of Ibycus, the avengers!" The audience shouted in turn, "The murderer has informed against himself." The man was seized, the other robbers discovered, and all were put to death.

The story is told in the ballad of German dramatist Friedrich von Schiller, (1759-1805), "Die Kraniche des Ibykos", which we memorized in school a lifetime ago.

Cranes play an important symbolic role also in Philip Roth's novel The Human Stain, which we dicussed in B&L a few years ago.

Scrawler
May 24, 2005 - 09:04 am
"But in the Bull Court we were comrades, men and girls, and sharers in a mystery, and craftsmen bound by our craft; often enough we were only hands to hold off death from one another, that and no more. Yet we were young, and made of the same stuff as other creatures Mother Dia brings forth into the light. Always drawn between us was a tight-wound lute-string that never snapped, yet never slackened; and, brushed or breathed upon, filled the air with its secret sound." (p.203)

I thought this was one of the most beautifully written paragraphs of the novel. It's as if we can see deep within Theseus's heart and soul. I personally think that the Cranes became much more than comrades. Yes, there was certainly friendship between them, but there was much more, something that perhaps defies explanation. Soldiers in battle might understand this feeling when they strike out toward the enemy and they know their comrades are with them. Or perhaps trapaze artists when they swing through the air toward their partners.

marni0308
May 24, 2005 - 05:01 pm
Scrawler: I had thought, too, of soldiers in battle sharing a feeling like the Cranes - re Traude's question about the "unparalled bond he [Theseus] established between himself and every member of his extraordinary team."

I've thought of the term "band of brothers" a number of times, although the Cranes includes women and men. I first heard the phrase as the title of the TV series about a tight-knit World War II unit. Then I read that George Washington called his officers in the American Revolution his "band of brothers." Recently, I read that Horatio Nelson called his crew on the HMS Victory his "band of brothers."

I found out that originally the phrase was from Shakespeare's Henry V. "Although Shakespeare penned this work nearly two hundred years after the Battle of Agincourt (1415), it remains the finest dramatic interpretation of what leadership meant to the men in the Middle Ages." The words, spoken by the king, are inspiring, as Theseus' words are inspiring.

"...This story shall the good man teach his son; And Crispin Crispian shall ne'er go by, From this day to the ending of the world, But we in it shall be remembered- We few, we happy few, we band of brothers; For he to-day that sheds his blood with me Shall be my brother; be he ne'er so vile, This day shall gentle his condition; And gentlemen in England now-a-bed Shall think themselves accurs'd they were not here, And hold their manhoods cheap whiles any speaks That fought with us upon Saint Crispin's day."

Judy Shernock
May 24, 2005 - 09:58 pm
Further symbolism of the word "Crane"(from my dictionary):

1)to CRANE ones neck-to see better

2)to hesitate at danger, diffuculty etc.

So here are further levels of meaning for the Cranes.

Theseus is really continuing his leadership role in whipping the young men and women into a loyal and successful group. He did the same thing with the"companions" of Eleusis. Here too he taught young men to be strong and loyal. And with this group the kill was a great Boar which is the precursor of the Bull. AS the story continues Theseus adds to his powers and matures. But the grown man was in the boy.

DeeW
May 25, 2005 - 09:38 am
I don't mean to jump ahead of the discussion,but last night, I was reading the scene where Theseus is called upon to sing for the guests' entertainmant. He chooses what he refers to as an old song from his home in Troizen. The words sounded eerily familiar to me, a man telling his wife how he must go to battle and more than likely be killed. Yet, he grieves for her more than himself, as he forsees what her future will be without him...a miserable slave in a foreign land. Has anyone else seen in this ballad an echo of Hector's last words to his wife before he is slain by Achilles. I gather that by the time Theseus is singing , the Trojan War was already ancient history...kept alive in the memory by songs such as this.

Scrawler
May 25, 2005 - 09:38 am
"As I say, the nights were broken with such things as this, or with someone dreaming aloud, or crying out, sometimes, in fears he would not own by day. One did not ask people their dreams in the Bull Court; nor what they thought about when they were wakened and lay silent in the dark. I know I thought of many things: of death, and fate, and what the gods want of man; how far a man can move within his moira, or, if all is determined, what makes one strive; and whether one can be a king without a kingdom." (p.222)

Edward Burnett Tylor was an English anthropologist of the 1800's. He believed that myths began through people's efforts to account for unexplainable occurrences in dreams. According to Tylor, the first idea about the supernatural was the belief that a soul lived within the human body. While the body slept, the soul could wander freely and have many adventures. These adventures appeared to people in dreams. People then came to believe that animals had souls. Finally, they decided that everything in nature had a soul. They could then explain, according to Taylor such natural events as the eruption of a volcano. Gradually, people came to believe that the souls controlling natural occurrences could answer prayers for protection or special favors. The idea that all things in nature have souls is called animism. Tylor considered animism the first step in the development of human thought and the basis of myths.

Tylor's theory is interesting and Mary Renault puts a new spin on his theory by having Theseus question his dreams. "One did not ask people their dreams in the Bull Court; nor what they thought about when they were wakened and lay silent in the dark." By having Theseus state this, he is in fact questioning not only his dreams as he lays awake in the dark but also life and death as well as what the gods want of him and the others at the Bull Court.

Traude S
May 25, 2005 - 11:36 am
Thanks for all your posts and your continued interest.

Not to worry, GOSSETT, according to the updated reading schedule in the header, we are discussing Books Four and Five in their entirety, so everything in it can be brought to the table.
Thank you for your posts, MARNI, JUDY SHERNOCK, SCRAWLER, GOSSETT and for your continued interest.

Most of my time yesterday was spent with the local book group. We met to discuss Jodi Picoult's "Salem Falls" - a modern book hence very different from "The King Must Die". We always have a great time together and yesterday's meeting was no exception.

The group was formed many years ago as one of several interest groups of our local branch of the American Association of University Women (AAUW), an organization to which I have belonged since the nineteen sixties. (I cofounded the local branch in 1974.)

MARNI, yes, Band of Brothers is a most fitting term. The team was unusual, indeed extraordinary, because they had pledged themselves to each other. Everyone was essential, and indispensable. Many were the occasions, Theseus says, when one came to the rescue of another in the ring at a crucial time. Each Crane was every bit as brave as Theseus; they trusted one another and kept the confidences, which Theseus began to share with them, strictly to themselves:
e.g. the small but growing arsenal of spears and javelins Theseus secretly hoarded, they were stored in the girls' quarters. That bolstered their hopes not only for survival but for escape.

Renault gives the legend a different twist making the Minotaur human: monstrous, but human, and names him Asterion. In the old Greek myth the Minotaur has no name and is half man half bull, the offspring of Poseidon (in the guise of a bull) and King Minos' wife, Ariadne's mother.

But Renault's description, narrated in Theseus' voice, is always dazzling, for example the description of the endless passageways of the Labyrinth, an enormous place built in tiers without walls, open to the sea and to the skies; the layout of the shrine to the goddess; and the banquets of the elite.

At one of them, summoned by Asterion, Theseus performs a ballad accompanying himself on the lyre. He does so well that the guests are highly pleased, but Asterion had intended to humiliate Theseus, not anticipating that Theseus could perform in the vein of a bard, since in Crete the role of entertaining guests fell to servants.

Yes, GOSSETT, you are absolutely right about Hector's last words. His wife, Andromache, is to me one of the most tragic figures in mythology. Forgive me for saying so, but I always liked Hector better than Achilles, who rather petulantly wasted much time before finally coming around. Just my humble opinion.

More later on Theseus' encounter with Ariadne.

Traude S
May 25, 2005 - 11:53 am


SCRAWLER, thank you so much for mentioning Edward Burnett Taylor in connection with dreams - a fascinating subject which will be explored and written about far into the future.

marni0308
May 25, 2005 - 01:28 pm
I first read about the myth of Theseus and the Minotaur when I was little girl. I had a picture book of myths and legends for children containing a terrifying (to me) picture of the Minotaur as a man with a huge bull's head.

In The King Must Die, I think we realize as soon as he is introduced that Asterion is the Minotaur. He is so stocky, strong, hairy, animal; and he seems so evil - Theseus' nemesis. And he is called the "minotaurus" because he is to inherit the crown, I guess like the French used the word "dauphin."

When Theseus seeks out Asterion out after the earthquake to kill him, he finds him in the bull court. I love the description. "Down in the earth court a man was standing, naked down from the neck; broad-bodied, thick-legged, thatched with black hair on chest and groin and shins, a-straddle before the sacred Labrys. His trunk glistened with the chrism a shaking old man and woman smeared on him with half-palsied hands. From the neck down he was man, and base; above the neck he was beast, and noble. Calm and lordly, long-horned and curly-browed, the splendid bull-mask of Daidalos gazed out through the sorry huddle with its grave crystal eyes."

Theseus must kill this half-man, half-beast wearing the king's bull mask; and he does. He stabs him. Then Theseus puts on himself the king's bull mask, and kills the minotaurus with the symbolic ax Labrys.

marni0308
May 25, 2005 - 01:33 pm
It seems that the bull mask used by King Minos to hide his disfigurement from leprosy has become the symbol of kingship in Crete. King Minos wears it until he dies, killed by Theseus. Then Minos' son, the minotaurus, wears it until he is killed by Theseus. Then Theseus puts it on and symbolically becomes king of Crete, I guess.

What an interesting description of what Theseus sees through the crystal eyes of the mask. "But I stood still, seeing through the crystal a small bright image, such as a god may see who looks down from the sky, far down and back for a thousand years to men who lived and suffered in ancient days; and in my heart was a long silence."

It is as if Theseus is a god here, seeing as a god. What does he think of himself?

Mippy
May 25, 2005 - 01:47 pm
Here is a link, showing the type of axe called the labrys:

Axe to kill the minotaur

The reference also gives the Greek language origin, which is always interesting, and a picture
of an axe archeologists found on Crete.

Traude S
May 25, 2005 - 03:16 pm


Many thanks for the posts and link.

Here are others about Ariadne
http://www.absoluteastronomy.com/encyclopedia/A/Ar/Ariadne.htm

http://theoi.com/Ouranos/Ariadne.html

http://www.paleothea.com/gallery.html

Back later

Stigler
May 26, 2005 - 05:58 am
I mentioned some time ago that I had a question or two about the ending of the book..... in the last few scenes, when Theseus leaves Ariadne on the island, were the local priests and Ariadne engaging in canibalism? And what was it in her hand that upset Theseus so much?

What was Mary Renault saying with this incident?

Judy

Mippy
May 26, 2005 - 08:13 am
cannibalism, probably.

Renault leaves us wondering. But it looks like one more king, or male leader of some sort, who must die.

We always hear about the Romans throwing the Christians to the lions, but the Greeks seem to have loved killing off their own leaders even more. I guess I cannot begin to figure out how a cult of man-killing evolved.
Actually, in France and England, during the years the religion of the Druids was dominant, human sacrifice was a normal religious ritual.
Can anyone elaborate about what was going on in these religions? I know they said the gods "demanded" sacrifice, but it's hard to understand.

Scrawler
May 26, 2005 - 09:03 am
Mary Renault was once thought to be a man writing about male characters using male narrators in many of her novels. Some believe that Renault's choice of writing historical fiction in a setting where only the male experience domiantes was actually her way of putting on a male mask as she invaded 'male' turf.

The confusion about her sexual identity is revealing and her sympathies - seem male. Theseus is a tough womanizing hero for unites and civilizes Greece under the leadership of patriachal Athens. And narrating for the most part in the first person from the standpoint of a male character, Renault seems enamored of male dynamos like Theseus in his gift of leadership, and romantic sense of destiny.

But why would a lesbian novelist, in novel after novel, focus on male characters, with women playing only marginal, often stereotypical roles as either monsters or victims? The most obvious answer is that once Renault had chosen to write historical fiction set in the ancient world, she could hardly do otherwise and remain true to the time period. Women could not possibly be plausible subjects for historical fiction because their lives were so secret and limited.

Through her choice of subject matter, Renault was donning a male mask in order to perhaps sugest that gender is itself more masquerade than biological essence. Renault's novels echo in troubling ways our culture's sexual stereotypes.

marni0308
May 26, 2005 - 01:39 pm
I, too, was wondering about the cannibalism and what body part was in Ariadne's hand. Whatever it was, it was a very recognizable body part and it shocked Theseus more than I think we saw him shocked anywhere else.

I don't recall reading anything about this in any of the Ariadne legend information in our links.

I don't think all of the women in the Renault's book were either monsters or stereotypes. Oh, wait..... I'm thinking of the Amazons and Hippolyte - Hippolyte's in the sequel. She's pretty cool and is his true love, I think.

Traude S
May 26, 2005 - 07:04 pm
STIGLER, MIPPY, SCRAWLER, MARNI, your posts are insightful and very welcome.

There's an old adage, and I paraphrase, If it isn't true, it's well invented" . I was thinking of it in terms of Renault's (conveniently) modified story. She re-ivented, even up-ended, quite a few things. One I have not mentioned before: the string which in our book leads Theseus into the depths of the Labyrinth, whereas, according to legend, Ariadne obtains from Daedalus, builder of the Labyrinth, a golden rope which leads Theseus safely out of it into freedom, after killing the Minotaur. That's why he went into it in the first place, according to legend, that is.

My credulity, I admit, began to waver when Renault placed such emphasis on Ariadne's tender age (16), her virginity and obvious innocence. That puts in serious question, for me, the verisimilitude of what happens when Theseus and Ariadne are on Naxos, specifically the bacchanalian excesses.

Or CAN such innocence indeed fall prey to deep-seated elemental forces?

But were those unspecified gruesome acts sufficient justification for Theseus to sail off without Ariadne after having told her father, Kig Minos, that she "is like my life to me" ? (pg. 275)
And hadn't he said earlier, "Sir, with my heart I pledge you, I will not rest till I have made her a queen."? (pg. 263)

Wasn't Theseus a bit censorious, at least in his thoughts, when he realized that Ariadne meant to FAKE the oracle ? (pg 266, bottom). He later muses, "I said to myself it was no matter, that when we were married I would be there to stand between the god and the people. Yet I was sorry she had not the Hearing; a king, like a craftsman, wants to breed his skill into his sons." (middle of pg. 267, emphasis mine). (Later after the earthquake he bemoans the fact that she didn't have the Sight, either.)

Or could Ariadne's behavior (for want of a better word) have been a manifestation of the "daimon of perversity that haunts our house." as King Minos said ? (pg. 263, emphasis mine)

STIGLER, how likely IS the transfer of leprosy in the manner described by Theseus/Renault? What is your medical take on this?

There is no doubt that what happened was so horrendous that even battle-hardened Theseus, who had seen many atrocities and killed several people before he was nineteen, could not utter the word for what Ariadne held in her hand.

The festivities on Naxos were ritualistic and pre-planned for the sacrificial death of yet another king, as stated above; there were night-long orgies up on the mountain and the participants partook of "the cup and smelled the smoke", as Theseus said of the priestesses (on pg. 266). We know Ariadne had wine (pg. 323), and from the evidence presented, barely camouflaged in the book, we must infer that the celebrants had engaged in cannibalism.

Did Theseus consider this impiety, on which he had often critically commented, or was it more? If so, what ?

We know there is a different, more charitable, more conventionally palatable version of Ariadne's abandonment than the one given in the book, and it is mentioned in the links.

But what concerns me as much, even more so, is Theseus' failure to take down the black sail and replace it with a white one. The reasoning he/Renault gives is disappointingly weak, in my opinion, too brief and not exculpatory.

Would you please let me now what you think about this point?

SCRAWLER, your analysis in # 176 is excellent and we have to return to that subject, to which I had briefly alluded before. Thank you all.

marni0308
May 26, 2005 - 08:54 pm
Theseus decided to leave Ariadne on Naxos based on her actions of the night and his reaction to seeing her, covered in blood and holding some body part after the frenzy of the night. Theseus says, "I remembered many things: the bloodied horns of bulls, the voice in the burning Labryinth. She had told me in our first night she was all Cretan. Yet not all; she was Pasiphae's daughter too."

If Theseus leaves Ariadne for this, why then does he marry her sister Phaedra in the sequel? Phaedra is also all Cretan and a daughter of Minos and Pasiphae.

marni0308
May 26, 2005 - 09:37 pm
As Theseus approaches home, he remembers his father's parting words: "When that day comes, mark your ship's sail with white. The god will have a message for me." Then Theseus ponders the meaning of his father's words. "He meant more than he would say before the people. A message, he said; a message from the god....For sure, if I paint the sail, I shall never look again on his living face."

Theseus thinks his father, "a man grown old too soon....a man grown weary," will commit suicide if he sees his son is coming back alive in order to make way for Theseus to be king. And Theseus doesn't want this to happen. So, he asks Poseidon if he should go on with the dark sail. The god answers him and Theseus peacefully leaves the dark sail. But Aegeus kills himself by leaping off the balcony.

The legend says Aegeus kills himself in grief. But, Theseus questions that. He does say at first, "How could I guess that he would so reproach himself; that he would not even wait till the ship reached harbor, to see if the sail told true?" But, then, Theseus questions the method his father used to kill himself. Theseus says, "Surely it was the god who sent the sign to him, as loud and clear as it came to me? We were both in Poseidon's hand; it was for him to choose."

So, Renault is saying the the god willed Aegeus' death to happen as it did. This ending makes sense to me. It was time for this king, Aegeus, to sacrifice himself to make way for the young, vibrant, strong king with the new ideas and ambitions. Things have come full circle from the first king to die, the King Horse, to the last in this book, Aegeus, each consenting to the sacrifice because it was time that the king must die.

Judy Shernock
May 26, 2005 - 10:03 pm
I am going out on a limb here but I was struck by the paragraph on the eaten and decimated fawn." Not far off was a streak of scarlet; a scarf,I thought, dropped by a girl. But when I got nearer it was, or had been, a fawn. There was not much left to know it by, but further on I saw the head. I stood silent, staring; for a moment the dance of my blood was stilled and chilled"

I see no other reason to include this paragraph if it is in not in some way connected to Ariadne and" the mouth hidden by blood and the teeth crusted with dried blood".

Between these two events there is Theseus rollicking with girls on the mountain.Possibly Ariadne held the sex organ of the fawn. (Don't all jump on me at once.)

What else would make him "heave and shudder"? Renault always gives us precursors. So these two paragraphs seem connected to me. The strong feelings and the nausea created by these two events so close to each other in the book. ,

marni0308
May 26, 2005 - 10:23 pm
I was thinking she was holding the penis of the "sacrificed" king. (I supposed it could have been the heart, but the sex organ would have had more of the shock impact on a man, I think.)

I thought the fawn torn apart was an example of the frenzy of the night. There was a lot of wildness going on that night. When Theseus saw the fawn's head, he started getting the idea of how far things might have gone that night. But then he got side-tracked in his own sexual affair when "time was lost."

Ariadne was "with the Queen and the maenads, following the god."

Stigler
May 27, 2005 - 07:11 am
Leprosy

Traude, I looked up leprosy and found that only 40% of people with advanced cases of leprosy are contagious. 60% are not contagious; but even more interesting is that 95% of all people have a natural immunity to leprosy and that is why very few of the people who care for victims of leprosy ever catch it themselves.

Therefore, I would think the chances of catching leprosy were slim.

Along the same line, I wondered about the mask being passed around and different people such as the son who was the minotaur and Theseus himself putting on the mask. At this time in history, leprosy was considered to be very contagious. That was why victims were quarantined from the rest of society.

Judy Shernock, I like your explanation of the events and the blood and body part being that of the fawn. As Traude pointed out, cannibalism and carrying human body parts seems out of character with Ariadne as she was portrayed earlier as being so young and innocent.

Stigler

Scrawler
May 27, 2005 - 09:04 am
"I never saw you so near in Athens. All the City mourned for you, and the King looks ten years older. How he will praise the gods for the news!"

"I thought a little, and then said, "Greeting, Father. Crete is rotten-ripe, and five hundred ships can take it. Ask the High King of Mycenae for his ships; there will be a great spoil to share. And gather the fleet at Troizen, for the Cretan warships do not call there. When your men come, I will arm the bull-dancers and seize the Labyrinth."(p.238)

Perhaps this was another reason for the King commiting sucide. The King and the country mourned for Theseus as if he were dead. And even if Helike's brother could get back to Athens with the message, would anyone really believe him? Of course Theseus tried to give the King, being a careful man some token by saying: "Theseus asks you whether the white boarhound still drinks wine," but the King showed by commiting suicide that he had not received either message. So who is really at fault here? Posiedon because he didn't protect both men. The King because he didn't wait for Theseus's ship to anchor. Or was it Theseus because he didn't change sails. Or was it really no one's fault and just a matter of circumstances which no one can really control - gods and man alike.

Judy Shernock
May 27, 2005 - 11:22 am
Sceawler, your post gave me an idea, What do you think of this?

THe Author called the book "The King Must Die". Many Kings died in this book. It is the theme that runs throughout. Perhaps all these Kings had to die so that Theseus can reign supreme?

The ending of the book seemed hurried and somewhat not of the same depth as other parts of the book. Had the author become tired of her project and finalized it in this easy way or did she intend some deeper thought..i.e. that Theseus in some way had to bring about his Fathers death in order to become the supreme King. This is the author deciding , not Poseidon deciding.

Sometimes Renault Psychology of the Gods goes astray. Wether she intends this or not is anybodies guess. This is the first book of hers I have read. I will read a couple of others to understand how she thinks.

Suggestions of her best ,anybody?

Traude S
May 27, 2005 - 11:47 am
Barely, that is.
I just came back from the ophthalmalogist's office, with my vision is still blurred from those miserable drops.

Thank you for your posts and new input. Will answer in detail later.

Stigler
May 27, 2005 - 12:47 pm
Traude, we look forward to your input; but while your eyes are blurred and you are recovering from your visit to your doctor, please rest. Perhaps you will feel more like posting tomorrow.

Judy

Traude S
May 27, 2005 - 07:16 pm
Thank you, STIGLER, everything is all right now. My vision is no longer blurred. I am anxious to follow up on so many threads that again I don't know where to begin.

For the start though, the reference to Ariadne's lack of "the sight" can be found in the second par. on pg. 280.
The scene is the last bullfight where Theseus is almost killed by the drugged bull he had named (significantly) Herakles .

Par. 1 ends with, "My girl in the shrine had been scared enough; at least I could salute her on my feet."

Next this:
"She stood bolt upright on her dais. Her paint stood out like a doll's, but she performed the ritual unfaltering. I was proud she had commanded herself, so as not to betray us; though she had not the Sight or the Hearing, I thought, she would make a queen." (emphasis mine)

One key to what happened on the mountain is knowing about the mythical Maenads. The Maenads or Bacchantes, as they were also called, were women frenzied with wine to the point of madness. They rushed through woods and over mountains uttering sharp cries, waving pine-cone-shaped wands, caught up in fierce ecastasy. Nothing could stop them. They would tear to pieces the wild creature they met and devour the bloody shreds of flesh.
"These madwomen, the Maenads, had no temples. They went to the wilderness to worship, to the wildest mountains, the deepest forests, as if they kept to the customs of an ancient time before men had thought of building houses for their gods.
They went out of the dusty, crowded city, back to the clean purity of the untrodden hills and woodlands. There Dionysus gave them food and drink: herbs and berries and the milk of the wild goat. Their beds were on the soft meadow grass; under the thick-leaved trees where the pine needles fell year after year. Thy woke to a sense of peace and heavenly freshness; they bathed in a clear brook. There was much that was lovely, good, and freeing in this worship under the open sky and the ecstasy of joy it brought in the wild beauty of the world. And yet always present, too, was the horrible bloody feast. (emphasis mine)

The worship of Dionysus was centered in these two ideas so far apart - of freedom and ecstatic joy and of savage brutality. The God of Wine could give either to his worshippers. ..." (Edith Hamilton, Mythology , pg. 68).

I'll now start a new post -- lest AOL disconnect me. They did that to me last night (again), and there is never a previous warning. Hence I did the long post over.

But I'm moving right along. Please have patience.

Traude S
May 27, 2005 - 08:24 pm
Now to answer your posts.
JUDY SHERNOCK and MARNI, I believe that Theseus would not have been THIS distraught if whatever Ariadne was holding in her hand had been the body part of a fawn. We can only guess. Renault leaves us tantalizingly in limbo about that.

STIGLER, thank you for your comments on leprosy and how it can be transmitted. In this book we learn the source was an armring King Minos had lost, that was eventually found in a spot already searched several times before, allegedly contaminated. Ariadne insists "all the doctors say so." To Theseus this seemed "too fanciful." (pg. 252)

Yes, Theseus was destined to reign supreme, and that is what happened. For the sake of completeness I'll write about that briefly next time.

It surprises me that Renault failed to realize that the somewhat lame explanation in the book is not satisfying but in fact tends to affect the reader adversely regarding Theseus (speaking for myself only), something she hardly intended. It makes Theseus look callous, even insensitive, IMHO. About the two versions of the story, here is what Edith Hamilton has to say,
"Both stories agree that when they drew near to Athens, he forgot to hoist the white sail. Either his joy at the success of his voyage put every other thought out of his head, or his grief for Ariadne. The black sail was seen by his father, King Aegeus, from the Acropolis where for days he had watched the sea with straining eyes. It was to him the sign of his son's death and he threw himself down into the sea, and was killed. The sea into which he fell was called the Aegean ever after." (Edith Hamilton, Mythology , pg. 216.)


I agree that Renault is rushing too much. The ending is precipitous, and I find Theseus' honeyed words and noble thoughts unconvincing.

Back tomorrow.

Scrawler
May 28, 2005 - 10:09 am
"I lifted the mask of Minos, and put it on. Through the eyes of thick curved crystal, everything looked little, far and clear; I had to pause awhile, to get the feel of it and judge my distance. Then I swung Labrys back, and brought her down, my head and shoulders and body coming around with the blow. The force of it tingled through my hands; and the voice at my feet was silent.

From the Throne Room above I heard the cry of the Cranes; and from the porch the din of rout, as the news reached the defenders. But I stood still, seeing through the crystal a small bright image, such as a god may see who looks down from the sky, far down and back for a thousand years to men who lived and suffered in ancient days; and in my heart was a long silence." (pp. 307-308)

These I think are the most important paragraphs in the whole novel. From these paragraphs we see through Theseus's own eyes what it means to be a god. "...seeing through the crystal a small bright image, such as a god see who looks down from the sky, far down and back for thousand years to men who lived and suffered in ancient days..."

The mask enabled Theseus not only to feel like a god, but to act like a good as well. Each time he takes a life he will remember those men who live and suffered in ancient days. Taking a life takes tremendous strength not only physically, but also psychologically. In times past we called it "battle fatigue" and now they have other names for the stress that soldiers feel after they have gone through battles. Long after a war is over men and women continue to see in their thoughts "a thousand years to men who lived and suffered in ancient days".

John Jakes in "On Secret Service" put it this way when he spoke of the American Civil War: "No matter how many of them tried to forget, the great struggle would be the single most important event of their lives. They would never be free of it."

And so just like Theseus we put on masks - not to see like gods, but to see like men and women and remember.

Traude S
May 28, 2005 - 04:47 pm
SCRAWLER, thank you for your interesting post about the meaning of the royal mask. Before I comment on that aspect in more detail, I'd like to follow up on my two previous posts,
specifically this significant passage in our book,
"They came beating the cymbals, or bearing long garlands twined among them, or waving the sacred thyrsos on long poles. As they danced they sang, but the song was wild and blurred, for the maenads had on their masks already. Above smooth shoulders and wreathing arms and dancing breasts, were the heads of lions and leopards, of lynxes and wolves. Their dark Cretan hair flowed free behind them. I thought that one could not have picked out among them one's own sister or one's wife. (emphasis mine, pg. 318)
The maenads were the female companions of Dionysus, hence "the god's maenad train" (pg. 319) The male followers of the god were the goat-like satyrs . They were eternally young and notoriously insatiable, forever tirelessly pursuing the nymphs .

In contrast to the ugly, unhuman satyrs, the nymphs had lovely maiden forms. They were minor deities, the spirits and protectors of nature, and called by different names depending on their habitat. Among them were the Dryads (forests), Naiads (brooks, springs, fountains), Neireids (the sea), and Oreads (mountains).

__________

Theseus was caught up in the madness on the mountain and oblivious to the passage of time. He "didn't know how long we stayed there; the time of Dionysus is not like the time of men." "... In the end we stayed all three together, and time was lost again." (pg. 320)

Later, looking down from the mountain, he saw "the Palace bright with torches, thinking that when I met Ariadne there, I would ask no questions and answer none, and then we should keep friends." (pg. 321)
An aside: Hmmmm, friends but no longer his queen ??

Later still, after the chariot with Ariadne in it has passed,
"I saw her tomorrow ..., washed from the blood, perhaps with the madness all forgotten, with wondering eyes looking about her, and seekig me. The chariot had passed out of sight down the hill road. I could hear no longer even the sound of the wheels." (pg. 325)

An aside: Has he already detached himself from her?

Still on pg. 325:
"I turned to the priest and found his eyes already on me. 'I have done an unlucky thing,' I said. 'Perhaps it has displeased the god. This is his feast day. It will be better for me to go. (emphasis mine)..."
Of the other paragraphs I'll quote just this one:

"You will tell your Queen then ... why we go like this by night, without thanks or farewell?"

__________

Theseus was engaged in many enterprises and adventures, which fired the imagination of prose writers and poets alike, Greek and Roman; Apollodorus, Plutarch, Ovid. He is a prominent character in three plays by Euripides and one by Sophocles.

Edith Hamilton used all available sources, and I will quote part of one relevant paragraph.

"So Theseus became King of Athens, a most wise and disintereted king. He declared to the peoole that he did not wish to rule over them; he wanted a people's government where all would be equal. He resigned his royal power and organized a commonwealth, building a council hall where the citizens should gather and vote. The only office he kept for himself was that of Commander in Chief. Thus Athens became, of all earth's cities, the happiest and most prosperous, the only true home of liberty, the one place in the world were he people governed themselves." Mythology , pg. 216.
What admirable, forward-looking, strikingly modern thinking and action, don't you agree?

to be continued

Traude S
May 28, 2005 - 08:17 pm
Before Mary Renault (born in 1905) turned to writing the historical fiction about ancient Greece for which she is best known, she authored six successful contemporary novels. For one of them she received the MGM award.

After receiving a degree in English from St. Hugh's College in Oxford, she trained to be a nurse at the Radcliffe infirmary in Oxford. After the outbreak of World War II she was assigned to the Winford Emergency Hospital in Bristol where she worked briefly with Dunkirk evacuees and then in the brain surgey ward, until 1945.

During her training she met Julie Mullard who became her lifelong companion. She published her first novel in 1939 under a pseudonym in order to mask her identity. She was struggling at that time not only with her vocation - nursing and writing - but also her sexual identity in the social and moral context of life in England during the war.

Here is a list of the books she wrote before she and Julie Mullard left England for South Africa.
Purposes of Love, 1934
aka Promise of Love
Kind Are Her Answers, 1940
The Friendly Young Ladies, 1944
Middle Mist, 1945
Return to Night, 1947
North Face, 1948

Later in her life she made light of her early work.

She traveled extensively in Africa, but it was her travels in Greece that inspired her brilliant historical reconstructions of Ancient Greece. And they are

The Last of the Wine, 1956
The King Must Die, 1958
The Bull from the Sea, 1962
Lion in the Gateway, 1964
The Mask of Apollo, 1966
The Praise Singer, 1978


The Alexander the Great series :
1. Fire from Heaven, 1969
2. The Persian Boy, 1972
3. Funeral Games, 1981.
She also wrote a biography of Alexander the Great, The Nature of Alexander.

Her 1955 novel The Charioteer is about a soldier and gay man who fought in the battle of Dunkirk in WW II.

In South Africa Renault changed her focus from her early contemporary novels of manners to the mature historical novels of Hellenic life. The classical settings allowed her to write about material too explosive to deal with directly while giving her the freedom to expound on subjects vital to her, such as women's roles, female and male homosexuality and bisexuality.

to be continued

Scrawler
May 29, 2005 - 09:24 am
According to Edith Hamilton, "Theseus wins the heart of the enemy king's daughter, Ariadne, who defies Minos and helps Theseus escape the Labyrinth with a ball of golden thread that he unwinds as he walks so that he can find his way back. Theseus finds the Minoatar asleep, beats it to death, and flees to the ship to sail home. Ariadne flees with him, and on the way home, he abandons her when she goes ashore and a fierce wind blows him out to sea. Ariadne dies, which is perhaps what make Theseus forget to lower the black sail and raise the white one. When Aegeus sees the black sail approaching, he commits suicide by jumping into the sea then named after him - the Aegean."

From "The King Must Die" we have: "The chariot passed, and no one followed; that was the end, and I rose to go. Then, when I was on my feet, I saw into the back of it. It was not empty after all. A body lay on its floor, jogging limply with the jolts of the rough road. I saw a torn blue skirt, and a little arched foot rouged at the toes and heel. (p.322)

"Wait!" I said. "I will see her, lucky or not. What has been done to her?" Is she dead?"
They stared at each other. "Dead?" said the young one "No. Why dead?" And the elder, "She will take no hurt, man, from our Naxos wine. It is all good, and we keep the best for today. Leave her be; her dream ought not to be troubled. While her sleep holds, she is still the bride of the god."

"She lay curled on her side, against the bull-horn headdresses which the men had taken off to ease their brows. her tumbled hair was like a sleeping child's but for the sticky points it ended in. Her eyelids lay smooth and full and glossy over her eyes, and against the dark lashes her cheek bloomed softly. By those I knew her, and by the tender breast cradled upon her arm. I could not see her mouth, for the blood all over it. It was open, for she was breathing heavily; I saw her teeth, even crusted with dried blood. As I bent over her, its stale reek met me mixed with the smell of wine." (pp. 322-323)

The above description from Mary Renaut, except for the blood, describes perfectly someone who is drunk. And in a sense when a loved one is drunk they are really "dead" to you and to the world around them. So to Theseus, Ariadne was really dead to him when he set sail. Hamilton suggests that this may have been the reason why Theseus did not raise the white sail which caused his father's death.

Than again Theseus began to question Ariadne's faithfulness when they were at dinner with the Queen: "Alas!" she said when she had heard. "Who can be called fortunate, till he has seen the end? Lady, you have known a change beyond the common lot. And yet the Fates have relented to you after." I bowed, and Ariadne smiled along the dias. But I remembered how she had said in Crete, "You are a barbarian; my nurse told me they ate bad children." And I thought within me, "Will she always see me in her heart a mainland bull-boy, even when I am a King?" (p. 316)

Traude S
May 29, 2005 - 10:48 am
Thank you for the quotations, SCRAWLER. I too had referred to Hamilton's account on pg. 216 of Mythology .

Since it was too late last night, I'd like to now complete the biographical information on Mary Renault.

There exist to my knowledge only two biographies:

Mary Renault: A Biography , 1994, by David Sweetman and

The Masks of Mary Renault: A literary Bigraphy, 2001, by Caroline Zilboorg, a member of the English faculty at Cambridge University.

The BN page on David Sweetman's book, Mary Renault: A Biography, has this
ANNOTATION
One of the most popular novelists of the 20th century, and the first to present homosexual love in popular novels, Renault shunned publicity. In a candid biography, Sweetman, one of few ever granted an interview with the reclusive Renault, tells her intriguing and fascinating story."
and this
FROM THE PUBLISHER
"Mary Renault wrote so sympathetically and with such candor about the male world of Ancient Greevce and about love between men that many readers believed that the best-selling uthor of The Last of the Wine, The King Must Die, and The Persian Boy must be a man."
...A revolutionary in sexual matters, she was accused of being politically reactionary; a passionate believer in Greek ideals of democracy and justice, she was among the first to join Black Sash, the women's movement that was in the forefront of the fight against Apartheid, but over the years her disillusionement with radical politics led her to withraw into a fictional world of her own creation. With full access to Mary Renault's letters and papers and to the story of her long romance with Julie, David Sweetman reveals how, in its concerns, her life cannot be divorced from her fiction, combining a brilliantly textural picture of her life with a revealing analysis of the novels." (emphasis mine)


From Caroline Zilboorg's 2001 book, Mary Renault: A Literary Biography, we further learn that
"Renault was accused of racism in her policies as president of the Durban chapter of PEN. Though openly and happily settled in a monogamous lesbian relationsip, she maintained a bisexual identity and had few, if any, lesbian friends. Her pioneering depiction of male homosexuality was so successful that many men imagined her to be a man. Yet she disapproved of South Africa's homophobic legal system because it forced gays into a homosexual underground where they 'met all the wrong sort of people' with whom 'they had nothing in common'. An instinctive feminist, she detested what she called "Women's Lib" and was wholly comfortable in terming heterosexuals"norma". ... Readers turning to this book as a biography will be disappointed; while Zilboorg's readings of the novels re solid and corrective, their author remains opaque. Thanks to Renault's extraordinary reticence and advanced sense of privacy we know only what she wants us to know." ( Publishers Weekly)
more later on masks and Phaedra.

Traude S
May 29, 2005 - 07:25 pm
Different kinds of masks have been used since at least Paleolithic times on different continents in many countries and cultures. They were made of materials as different as wood, basketry, corn husks, leather, skulls, cloth, papier mâché, and others.

Ritual masks depict deities, mythological beings, good and evil spirits; human or totem ancestors, for example.

Theatrical masks were worn in Ancient Greek plays, in the mystery and miracle plays of medieval Europe, during the Renaissance (the masked balls at Court).

Carnival masks are still worn during carnival season, for example in Venice. African as well as American Indian masks, for example, are highly prized.

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The story of Phaedra is described in Renault's The Bull from the Sea , also told in the first person with Theseus as narrator. Like The King Must Die , The Bull from the Sea , its sequel, is fiction.

As an attempted answer to MARNI's question it may be worth noting that, according to Edith Hamilton who drew on different sources, Theseus married Phaedra in the later years of his life . Before that his love was the Amazon Hippolyta, the mother of his son, Hippolytus.

As I prepare for an overview of the book, your thoughts and impressions will be welcome and appreciated. Thank you.

Scrawler
May 30, 2005 - 09:19 am
That phrase is something that I remember from my childhood and I've heard it used in reference to soldiers fighting in war. But perhaps it is time to question "fate" unlike Theseus.

"In private grief, would he not have gone like a common man, by falling on his sword, or by strong poppy which steals the soul in sleep? But he leaped from that same balcony above the rock, where once I had been afraid for him, and pulled him back from the edge. Suely it was the god who sent the sign to him, as loud and clear as it came to me? We were both in Poseidon's hand; it was for him to choose.

Man born of woman cannot outrun his fate. Better then not to question the Immortals, nor when they have spoken to grieve one's heart in vain. A bound is set to our knowing, and wisdom is not to search beyond it. Men are only men."(p.332)

Men are only men as are women are only women. Do we have a right to question our fate? In our day and age with all the miracles of medicine and science we put our faith in doctors, but are they any different from the immortals of ancient times. Would it not be better to put our trust in ourselves or must we set to our knowing, and wisdom a bound [and] not to search beyond this bound. But in the end I would like to think that it is OUR choice to make regardless of ancient gods or modern doctors.

I've enjoyed this discussion very much. Is anyone here interested in reading: "The Bull from the Sea" or "The Alexander Trilogy"?

Stigler
May 30, 2005 - 11:39 am
I would love to read "The Bull from the Sea" but would prefer to wait a bit.

I've signed up to read and discuss "Rembrandt's eyes" and that will keep me busy.

I have truly enjoyed this discussion. I used to take part in the book discussion on AOL and enjoyed that very much; but the groups here on seniornet.org seem to give many more links to sites that enhance the reading enjoyment. In many of these discussions, I have felt as if I were in a classroom, I have learned so much. It is very satisfying.

Judy

DeeW
May 30, 2005 - 06:41 pm
In answer to your question, Scrawler ...I would love to join with you, Stigler and any others who want to read The Bull From the Sea. I find this group so interesting and enthusiastic. The pace as set by Traude is not hard to keep up, even for someone like me who stays busy. I find the reading a welcome change from my usual daily activities...painting watercolor, quilting, gardening and, when there's not escaping it, housework!

Traude S
May 30, 2005 - 07:36 pm
STIGLER, thank you for your kind words, dear AOL friend. Yes, here we like to take our time, we try to use it wisely and listen to each other. Our aim is to have a good time together, perhaps learn in the process, for we live and learn, don't we? I am truly glad you have joined us.

SCRAWLER, since "The Bull from the Sea" is the sequel, it would be logical to read it next. But I agree that a hiatus is a good idea.
We also need to first determine whether there is sufficient interest and hence the possibility of a quorum, and- last but not least- consult the schedulers. I believe MARNI or MIPPY, or both, have read "The Bull...".

The Alexander trilogy would certainly be a more massive undertaking and, obviously, take longer than one month.

Thank you for returning to the aspect of fate.
You are right, of course, that ultimately it is we who make the choice, we who exercise free will, to the extent possible.

Now that we have reached the end of the book and our month-long exchange, it is fair to ask, I believe, whether the moira Theseus/Renault talk about in the book is different from what we call "fate".
IS there any perceivable difference? If so, what is it?

Based on thorough scholarsip Renault created a brilliant portrait of life in Ancient Greece and in a thriving multi-racial Cretan empire that encompassed the surrounding islands, among them Dia/Naxos; all of them obligated to render tribute to Crete -- in one form or another.
By changing the Minotaur from a monster into a human no less cruel villain in the character of Asterion, she made the legend into a plaussible novel for the 20th century reader.

The writing is outstanding in its eloquence, surprisingly detailed, credible, and, to repeat, lyrical in many, many places.

But is Theseus himself a convincing character?

His personality traits emerge early on and his actions are consistent. But the note he sent to King Aegeus was apparently somewhat deficient in its spelling, as we have read.

Do we really believe that this same unpolished, socially inexperieced, indeed oftn insecure young man wrote those extravagantly beautiful, often limpid, descriptions?

Renault favored first-person narration. But therein lied a danger, I submit:
We see all the characters in this novel through Theseus' eyes, in his perception.
Can we really rely on him?
How can he possibly describe what another character felt?

As I've said already, the terms "gentleman", "baron", and "gentlemanly behavior" struck me as incongruent, coming from Theseus' voice.
The great strength of the book is in the writing, I believe. Rereading shows many, many ancillary tidbits, perhaps at first overlooked, and small epiphanies.

More tomorrow, on our last scheduled day.

Traude S
May 30, 2005 - 07:50 pm
GOSSETT, wonderful to hear from you! Thank you for expressing your interest in "The Bull from the Sea".

It may indeed be fun to "look up" our old friend Theseus, meet a few familiar characters and many new ones in this continuing story.

We may be able to add a day or two to this discussion, if warranted.

Thank you all.

marni0308
May 30, 2005 - 07:55 pm
I did read The Bull From the Sea immediately after finishing The King Must Die. I was lucky enough to find them together in the library and see that Bull was the sequel to King. They definitely go together. I enjoyed them both very much.

For a book club, I think I'd rather go on to the Alexander books. I've been wanting to read about him because of the History Channel programs about him on TV this year and the movie (not that the movie was very good). Strange that here he was one of the most brilliant military leaders who ever lived, and I hardly know anything about him.

Stigler
May 31, 2005 - 05:47 am
Please count me in whether we read "Bull from the Sea" or The Alexander books. I love history (that was my minor in college). If we don't read "Bull from the Sea" as a group, I plan to check it out of the library and read it on my own.

But I will join the group in reading any book the group decides to read.

Judy

marni0308
May 31, 2005 - 08:38 am
I love history, too. I just finished David McCullough's John Adams. I believe I saw in a comment that it was one of the SeniorNet book club selections awhile back.

McCullough is very hot right now, it seems. His new book 1776 is just out and being promoted all over the place. I'd like to read that. Also, a bunch of his other books are being sold (paperback) at a discount in places like BJ's and Costco. I think a fascinating selection for our book club would be his: The Path Between the Seas - about the building of the Panama Canal.

Scrawler
May 31, 2005 - 09:38 am
When you use a first-person narrator, you are almost required to tell the story in someone else's voice. You create the narrator's voice through his implied past, letting the speech reflect his educational level and regional accent in syntax and word choice. Since Mary Renault wrote this book in 1958 it is not surprising that a few "modern" words slipped into her word choice, but by and far I think she does reflect Theseus's true Greek heritage.

The main limitation on the first-person narrative is that your narrator has to be present at the key scenes. So you have to work your narrator into the action so tightly that he is present whenever you need him to observe something. The easiest way is to make the narrator the protagonist. Which is what Renault has done. The problem is that over the course of the novel the protagonist is likely to suffer terrible loss or pain; how than will his voice serve to tell these things? This is I think what happens at the end of this novel. Theseus not only looses the woman he loves or thinks he loves, but he also looses his father. Because the novel is in first-person narrative we can never really see how Theseus feels about these events. He tells us how he feels, but can we really trust him at this point? This, I think, is why most people were disappointed in the ending of the novel.

Remember when as a child we got this enormous gift-wrapped box and we got all excited, but when we opened it - it had only new clothes in it - when we were expecting something quite different. Obviously the new clothes are important, but still we hoped for something we could have fun with. This is the feeling I got when I read the ending of the book. I expected something more.

Traude S
May 31, 2005 - 05:46 pm
MARNI, I fully understand that, having read "The Bull from the Sea", you are more interested in the Alexander trilogy.

The decision of whether to offer another Renault book for discussion, and if so which one(s) and when, will have to be made at some point in the future. We need to take into account personal plans as well as general scheduling concerns. A brief hiatus is now in order.

SCRAWLER, I detect a note of disappointment in the last sentence of # 204.
The "more" you had expected from this book might possibly be found in the sequel, but there is no guarantee.
Sometimes we feel frustrated with the ending of a book, or dissatisfied with the plot, or all of it. Not every reader will feel the same way about any given book. But the joint venture is worth it, in most cases, I believe.

We have come to the end of our journey. I have thoroughly enjoyed the pleasure of your company on the way, your feedback and insights. I hope to see you in another discussion in B&L.

My gratitude to each and everyone of you,
Traude

marni0308
May 31, 2005 - 10:35 pm
Traude: Thank you so much for leading our discussion. You provided insights, guiding questions, and links that made this a very fruitful discussion.

Marni

Mippy
June 1, 2005 - 02:10 pm
Thanks so very much for leading an excellent book discussion!

DeeW
June 1, 2005 - 03:55 pm
I feel like I've been in a classroom these past weeks, an experience I've missed for years now. Hope to meet you all again in the future discussion of Renaults writings. Traude,you're a born teacher!

Traude S
June 3, 2005 - 08:29 pm
Thank you all again, till we meet again ! T

Marjorie
June 4, 2005 - 08:38 am
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