GRRRRR I was attempting to make a point about the town being "as flat as a flannel cake" and I lost my whole post.
A flannel cake looks like a pancake to me, but I've never heard it called this. When I first read it, I thought it read
FUNNEL cake.
Anyway, I cracked up because the name of the town is
SUMMIT. Now that's funny, a town as
flat as a pancake, called
Summit. OK then- there must be a crowning point or apex in a townlike this, right?
Certainly the peasantry was not elevated or eminent. Doesn't
this sentence open up an entire thought for the whole short story, even before we
consider the plot?
The narrator of this short story describes a mysterious plot indeed. Bill afterward exressed the kidnapping idea as a
moment or temporary mental apparition, (which they didn't find out about until later.)
Isn't an apparition an illusion, something ghostly? This man(O.Henry) brilliantly sucks us right into this vortex doesn't he?
All throughout this read I felt a compulsion to smile, shake my head in amazement at these 2 fools and wonder, puzzled,
what were you thinking- a 9 year old?