Jonathan, I couldn't agree more, for exampleon Desdemona. The author puts these words into Veneering's mouth, we must remember, and, as I suggested before, he may not have been "up" on Shakespeare
Yes, it's fun to look for clues and cross-references in the deliberately mixed-up chapters, but most of our urgent questions will not be answered in this volume. Besides, there's more to learn about Edward's from Part Two, things we cannot foresee.
JoanP, I'm looking for the remark by Filth ("feeling like Filth", literally) . It's impossible without context, and I haven't found it yet.
Do you have the page number?
Bellamarie, inconsistencies are annoying. I remember getting upset ages ago when a girl's eyes were described as
blue and lagter in the story wee reported to be
brown. Or when something doesn't make sense - like
the factory set in a deli. There is a slight inconsistency, but I'm trying to find the passage again. Pazienza.
Affection and love are rarely 50/50 in a marriages. And as I have suggested before, it is possible that Edward's feelings for Betty were stronger than hers for him. He is always formal, neithereems to be demonstrative; so far Betty is rather
passive. Her strong emotional reaction to Veneering's call isquite therefore unusal, a red flag. She masks it, and when Filth asks, she tells him "it was nothing". Liar, liar ...
BTW, have you considered the name Veneering and a possible connection to
veneer ? Used in construction, it is a
layer of masonry applied over bricks but without
not providing additional structural strength. Is there an association of ideas ? I can't help feeling this is intentional. We might keep it in mind, possibly for a question to the author.
JoanP, re Edward's letter to his father. more power to him! His fingers work without impediment, unlike his tongue. But eventually he masters that, too, and exceedingly well.
Just came across an interesting phrase I had marked, on pg. 164, last two lines, to first line, pg. 165. He is visiting Claire Claire
who is "peacefully widowed" [/b]
"
And there she sat now, gentle, shoulderless as a courtesan on her linen-covered sofa, smiling." "shoulderless" is a bit odd. Were her
shoulders bare, by any chance? The word 'courtesan' is not a problem but his (or Gardam's) applying the term to Claire is - well, interesting.
Perhaps the author herself felt there was more to tell about Filth, Betty and Veneering. In O.F. we see everything from HIS perspective, HIS youth, adolescence, adventures and adulthood --- alas not in that order.
We
need to hear about
Betty's life, HER youth and HER relationships, pearl necklaces included.
It took Gardam 5 years to write the companion book. We are lucky,
we can lay our hands on it any time we want.
Always good to see tou,
Andy !
Late again, good night !