She sure challenger us right off the bat doesn't she - so glad you are part of this discussion
JoanP and
Pedln - and
Marcie thanks for being a partner in this read - yes, who is telling the story - they seem to be there as an observer - do they know all or are they simply an observer - we shall see what we shall see as the phrase goes -
The biggie -
the first chapter - First let me say you can enjoy and understand this entire book without making sense of the first few chapters - the author does throw us because her first chapters are not typical of how a story opens and is set up...
What we do know just reading the pages for this week - we ask - why start the book with these three short chapters about secondary characters? Usually, in the first chapter or chapters, you get a sense of what the story is all about. When I read the book for the first time I was sure it was a Fantasy novel - with a disappearance - rotting leaves - forest roads - finding a scarf 50 feet away - the sound like water spiders - come on if that is not the kind of opening for a fantasy novel I do not know - then we have a bottle found 6 days later and a man, Paul passed out in the black leaves of this forest with a pale moon.
After all this atmosphere we get the first glimpse of the life of this man called Paul - his plan to read a couple of books by Stendhal - OK the title of this book is the
Novel Bookstore so titles of books are probably going to be included and where we on Senior Learn have read a book written by Stendhal I know I hadn't and I bet no one else has read either of these two books - so what I say and read on.
Only reading this the second time did I pick up an the clue
how important those books were with the quote from Madame Huon - and seeing the both books mentioned again in another early chapter - by then on the hunt I was switching back and forth translating as much French as I could find - and pulling up whatever I could remember of how a book is organized.
Writing a first chapter is an important skill for anyone writing a Novel - and an important chapter for the reader to determine if the book is worthy of their time and to find out what is the thesis of the story. Here are some links describing what the first chapter of a book includes -
I prefer using this link - It is clear and easy to read but I will list a few others that I referred to on my trail of figuring this out.
Write and Publish Your Book - writing the first chapterFict-On; Opening ChaptersThe Business of WritingContemporary Lit. First Chapters, ExcerptsSo let's see what we have comparing our first chapter to the inclusions recommended for a first chapter.
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Introduce your main character.Your protagonist. In the case of stories with multiple points of views and multiple main characters this might not necessarily apply, but if your story is about 'someone' it is a good idea to have them appear somewhere on the first page. So is Paul our protagonist - is the forest with the pale moon a central character - is the young Jules Reveriaz or Suzon, the main characters?
Well there goes the first page - how about the second page - The two books and the author Stendhal - the names of several vehicles and an unknown proprietor of L'Alpette.
Before we track, let’s look for more clues of what we should expect to find in the first chapter...Because you guessed it the first thing was to Google L'Alpette, the vehicles named and finally the two books...
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Do not give too much away. The first chapter should be a teaser. It should intrigue and create anticipation and suspense, whilst also giving enough detail on the character and the world of the story to keep the reader interested.Ok she does that in spades...
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Set the tone and style. Is there a strong voice coming through in the first chapter? How are you marking yourself out from all those other stories and writers out there? Try to establish your own unique style and tone, make your authorial voice loud and clear, but without bashing people over the head. Readers are wise, and have probably read as much, if not more than you have. They know what to expect from a story, so it is better if you can upset that expectation somehow by giving them something a little bit different. However, make sure that your style is consistent with the rest of the book.Ok tone - definitely French - I am thinking I better get a good handle on what is meant by tone so I turn to this link
Writing Tone and Pace which among other tips says,
"# The tone and pace should match the novel's theme and intention. If you open in a literary voice, the reader expects this voice to be fairly constant. -The main character should set the tone. Is the character bitter, funny, desperate?"hmm is Paul the main character? Well having read some 100 pages he does not appear to be the main character - definitely a mystery about this that the description of the Forest in the pale moon helps to set and finding things days later along with things happening that other folks are not aware of when they happen and even Paul has no clue what happened or who did it. That is when the concept is made evident this is a story within a story - what happened to Paul is like that play in the middle of - was it
Hamlet or
Macbeth - one had the witches as a scene separate from the main story and the other had a traveling group or even in
One Thousand and One Nights, Scheherazade tells stories separate from what she is experiencing with the king.
More and more those two Stendhal books seem to hold the clue and if we were up on our Stendhal we would know without all this fal da rah of looking up - talk about writing a mystery - we are in the middle of one of our own and we haven't read past the first chapter.
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Stakes.What is at stake here? What is the story about. The first chapter should satisfy the reader's need to understand what the story is going to be about, what challenges the character will face, the odds stacked against them. Can you establish empathy with the main character in those first vital few pages?Well we are not yet sure, who is the main character or what the story is about - so far, it is a mystery that has us by the tail.
Can you establish empathy with the main character in those first vital few pages? This should be one of your main goals. If the reader does not care about the character, they might well give up on your story.Well we care about this poor man who has stumbled out of the forest... but he must be symbolic of something if we decide this is a story within a story.
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Make your character human. Presenting the character as a fully-dimensional person with believable attributes, who is in a situation that the reader can relate to. It sounds obvious enough, but is easier said than done. Try and speak to the reader as if you are talking to them on a personal, one-to-one level; make it intimate, intense and present them with a character and situation that is unique, intriguing and makes them want to read more.Until we know who this main character or characters are - plus the next two chapters brings us face to face with a few more sympathetic characters and a whole host of characters that bring a smile to your face as they are described - you can almost see the tableau of village life.
OK the two books must be found - they seem to hold the key - well here is a nice short review translated from the French - this is the link to the translated page -
Culture et DebatesA
Project Muse, Journal 19th C. French Studies, Mina de VanghelHere are pieces of the novel since Google does not reprint an entire book
Pink and Green and Mina de VanghelAnd finally here is the entire 28 page story
Mina de VanghelI must come up for some air - yes the PDF link to the story is in French - yes, I found the book at Amazon and purchased it AFTER would you believe running the entire story through Babel to get that crude translation. - a second post will follow of a 'quick' - yes, I can do quick -synopsis but more, the quote that say something meaningful and the quote is repeated in various ways throughout the story.