I mentioned many months ago that i was going to read mysteries set in NJ and Pa, just to have some restriction of choices. I haven't stuck to that resolve very well, but i recently picked up Robin Hathaway's Sleight of Hand, set in South Jersey. Terrible! She makes mistakes about the area's geography, about other simple things, like saying her character paid the toll when she got ON the NJ Tpk, which seems insignificant, but anyone who has ever gotten on a turnpike knows you pay the toll getting off of it??? I read one whole chapter and asked myself "why is this chapter in this story? " There are actions by the characters that have no explanation as to why. No more Hathaway!