I think I will see if my Library has A Corner of the Veil. It sounds interesting and I want to see if it also seems "flat".
It all reminds me of my old English Comp I teacher, who told me I wrote like a textbook. In other words, my writing also lacked emotional content. What did he expect. Most of my reading had been non-fiction or textbooks. I could tell a good story, but it was flat. He wasn't, apparently, well liked with the department chair because he was more interested in just getting students to not be afraid to write and to put some emotion and descriptive their writing than he was getting the spelling right or the correct punctuation. That, I think, came from his interest in theatrics. I appreciated it, but then I didn't need a lot of help with punctuation or spelling or sentence structure.