"The best I can say is that Godfrey and the lawyer Bruff are fawning over Rachel, perhaps with a view to control her inheritance to their advantage."
Fry...I see that you have yet to read Mr. Bruff's narrative. After reading that, I have come to see Bruff in a different light - with Rachel's interests at heart. Not so sure about Godfrey's feelings for Rachel though...
WilkieC has presented a rivetting plot, but there is other commentary just below the surface. So similar to what Dickens was wrting . They must be reflecting the attitudes of their readers at the time. The religious do-gooders come under fire here. BUT, while we laugh at the extremes Miss Clack goes to in "spreading the word," - hiding those tracts all through her aunt's home...do you really doubt her committment to "spreading the word" and "converting" her cousin? I can understand the family losing patience with her zealous attempts, of course. But this is her whole life. These are the causes she lives for... She is clearly smitten with Godfey, who only has eyes for Rachel. She wants her aunt to leave her a little something, but wouldn't she find a good cause for it? In all, I'm nto seeing Clack as a hypocite. I wonder what you think of her.
Godfey is another story. He professes to be so in love with Rachel...talks her into accepting his proposal, knowing that she does not love him. But why? Didn't he recover quickly when Rachel tells him the engagement is off? Not the behavior of a young man whose heart is broken. Does Wilkie intend for us to accept this state of affairs -
Or did I miss the explanation? Does Godfrey really and truly enjoy his charitable works with Miss Clack and her ladies?
If I had go guess, I'd say that he was forced into the engagement by someone, or by circumstance -- and when Rachel releases him, he feels nothing but relief...happy to return to his former position, adored by ladies everywhere...